Underneath the moon - Reviews

The Mech Touch is one of the best original novel in this site, sadly it was become worst and worst. The story itself is interesting, the writing is a solid one, it is one of the best writing quality I have ever seen in original novel. So whats the problem? At first the story progress is slow but detailed about the MC, it was understandable as the author try to paint the world around MC. But what happen if that keep happening for 500 chapter? Then you got slow, full of bs and useless story or filler you may call. The story development become more and more slow, and you got a turtle pace story. Mob character get so much attention for 10-30 chapter and then disappear as they either dead, or become useless for the MC. Then you may think, why dont the author cut the filler, focus on the MC and stop making the story longer and longer than necessary? My answer, greed, the author is full of greed for your SS. Not it is wrong, not my problem, my problem is the time you wasted reading this useless filler story that got little to no impact to the MC and core story! You hope the story progress but for 3 days or 6 chapter and more it still stuck to that one battle with almost no relation to the MC, author keep making detailed BS of this mob character A who killed mob character B, C, D, E, F and so on so on. And it was not the first time he do it! While he keep making this BS nobody care, the character building become abandoned, many important side character got little to no story, and a mob character got more than 10 chapter, "u mad bro?"Another problem of this "detailed filler" is it wasnt even that interesting or correct enough, the chain command in the military is so bad and stupid the MC's country should be destroyed long ago. The mob character got to many explanation, you start to think maybe he become the next side chara, and then bam, no word anymore. Another time there is a filler full of mech battle, wait not that kind of mech battle, I mean what pilot in mech battle think in the fight, it wasnt even that interesting or important, and it got so many explanation! Like the reader care about that kind of BS! The author only want to increase word count like greedy chinese webnovel author, so he got more SS.Author build so many background BS, the story become so full of background story that got no explanation or attention for a long long long time! And he keeps adding more! The MC unfinished problem at chapter is maybe 1 or 2, but at chapter 500 he got 10 or more. There is no focus in the story, author is not just greedy about SS, but greedy about all kind of story development. It become to chaotic because of all the filler! This novel is a HONEY TRAP! It have excellent writing, but chaotic story development. You may read and think how good the story is at first, but as you go, and read far above 200 chapter, it become snail pace and full of filler. The problem is it was very subtle, and when you realize it you already read far to many chapter, therefore a honey trap, it was a good story until you realize it is a trash. Dont believe me? Read it yourself! Waste you time, I dont care. I only rant here because the author never read comment.

A really excellent story.  I'm a sucker for mech stories in general, but this is still stand out.  Solid writing, consistently good grammar and a protagonist that doesn't seem to be having an OP lucid dream put this story at the top of those on webnovel.That said, please do something about that cover.  I almost didn't read the book, assuming anyone who half-assed a cover rather than spend five minutes on it would be half-assing the book.  Granted, that wasn't the case, but it's just shoddy.It's easy.  Here's how:1. Go to Pixabay (https://pixabay.com/en/) which has free commercial quality images. 2. Search for mechanics, or robotics, or something else you find interesting.  Download an image.  3. Open it in paint. 4. Make a colored border by using the "fill area" bucket-shaped button.  Black, or a darker shade of the background color for the image itself will work well. 5. Then click the letter that lets you add text and name it.  Put "The Mech Touch" at the top, and "By Exlor" at the bottom.  Make sure to use a different color for the font so that it's legible (eg, white on the black border), and to use a font size large enough to be legible.6. Save and upload as your cover.

Predictable and cliche. If you are expected real character then you better look somewhere else. Even had the cliche scene of entering a store like a broke person then showing up some randoms that talked trash for going into the store. Like I understand it's modern but why does everyone talk so unnaturally. ugh

So after reading 59 chapters I can say that this was a waste of time. The story development went 180 degrees. I don't want to be rude but I've seen better novels than this.

Honestly i was here just because the Mc was a sworld wielder and he was OP as hell. Personality wasnt that great but bearable.At chp 70 you just **** those things.The rape scene got rewritten but even than mc is suddenly weak as fk and this made me drop the novel.If this novel had a quality above other novels i might have overlooked but honestly its subpar with aaaaalot of novels in this genre i was here just as i said above, OP MC and Sworldsman.Good luck

I like the story......................................................................................................................................

gimme the rawgimme the raw gimme the raw................................................................................................................................

It's been a month since the last update, please don't drop this story and update soon. It's been awhile since I found a story I liked as much as this one and I really want to know what happens next.

Nice story, Has some romantic tension and betrayal in the prologue, I am excited to see where the story is headed

I'll be completely honest here, I want to like this novel a lot more than I currently do.Writing quality: honestly leaves a lot to be desired, grammar is at times terrible. This wouldn't matter as much if it wasn't for the rampant inconsistency of information given out throughout the story.Story development: is very, very slow, again not a big deal, but the constant changing of basic information given out makes it very hard to follow and quite frankly quite tedious to read at times.Character design: I think the concept is good, and I really appreciate that the mc has for lack of a better word "normal" family life. But there's little to no interaction with others so far(50 chapters in, and we can count the people he's spoken to enough to warrant actual conversation text on 1 hand).Updating stability: I've given this full marks since I'm only 50 chapters in, and I don't know.World Background: Again I love the concept, I really do. I always appreciate a good system and the fact that there's a system for everyone not just mc (albeit not as extensive as the MCs but skills and rating exist for all as well as stones to absorb etc.)

This is another reason why there should be no civil war. The Sky Marshal wanted to gain political support in order to gain more power for the war. It would be funny, Ironic and a bit of karmic just if instead that our character gains the public and political support to the point that he is the unquestioned leader of the Federation. If we have a civil war then there will still be doubts. The treacherous Sky Marshal is literally giving us power on a silver plate.

Waisted about 300 stones to open the chapters and find out its dropped that vast a waist of time and money sense I paid for the sp