Under the enemy moon - Reviews

Under the enemy moon
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pretty good overall. but it really needs an editor. there are spelling mistakes and mistakes in what word is written often enough that it really affects your ability to enjoy the story. if you can get past it, then it's a worthwhile read.
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from a first look, it's an extremely familiar overall worldscape (vr capsules, haptic feedback for training purposes, time dilation, a weak MC who flukes out, etc), however the author fleshed those out in rather intriguing ways, the only downside, I'm guessing the author isn't confident in English and for some reason doesn't use any grammar or spellchecker features, which I can almost guarantee will break any immersion the intrigue built up... that said, I was hooked until 150 and that's only because the author clearly and obviously hasn't realised that's an earlier chapter... which worries me because people were reading it before me and apparently they didn't notice...
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hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm the story abandoned?hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm the story abandoned?hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm the story abandoned?hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm the story abandoned?
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Well, decent story, I gave this story average of 3.8 * for this story... Well, I really like the concept and world-building of this story, the story is interesting and the characteristic of the character also strong, but here is the thing that bothers me and makes me less enjoy when reading this story1. The author really wants the misunderstand troupe of MC is weak from bystander continue, we'll I know it is to drive the plot but continuing it for a long time is annoying. Moreover the build-up each time when people offend the MC isn’t get paid by the conclusion, aka, the conclusion is not really satisfying...2. I know that the MC is a kind hero before, but how he reacts and doing something is really annoying, like what the purposes of hiding his identity when you literally always blurted out his identity as master... And the stupidity why he hides his strength...3. Less screentime of MC’s slice of life, I mean I am interested in this story because the title and the synopsis also tag make me want to read about MC slice of life as retired OP HERO... But his slice of life time is so little here, also what got us hooked about this genre, like face slapping etc isn’t included here, just like I said above, the author introduced many xianxia’s cliche arrogant character here, but the conclusion after they offending the MC is not satisfying.
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I'm going to give 5 stars for the most part to start with. I hope to see more chapters soon find the book interesting so far, though not a full 5 stars
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Patriarch Blue helping Lu Yan to stand himself. While it seems a general advice, his hopes for Lu Yan future set clear in his words.
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The "Holidays are coming!" advertisement features a train of red delivery trucks, emblazoned with the Coca-Cola name and decorated withChristmas lights, driving through a snowy landscape and causing everything that they pass to light up and people to watch as they pass through.[113]
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Jibril: Yes, His Highness.
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"oh!"queeneth got up ,hands on her head.she then circled around him and shook her head. she did  so again and then nodded her head.
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He could just walk in on me…naked in the shower.
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What about the other novel that has similar title but exact same synopsis and the same chapters but theirs has more chapters?

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