Well... Although the idea is ok, the quality is not very good. First, typos, grammar errors and such. Not too many, but still more than should be. Author, please, at least use Grammarly (I think that's how add-on is called) to check before posting.Secondly, and this is most important. The story is just sketch. Little to no descriptions, little immersion, little to nothing on characters, they just feel blank, lacking details, thoughts or feelings. This is why they so forgettable.Conclusion: I don't recommend it. It's not that bad that you can not read, but it just doesn't worth it at the moment. Hopefully, things would change, but maybe not.