Unbroken Melody - Reviews

nice and twisty

The Fuck???????Cant understand **** here .... sometimes its he sometimes its she or at the beginning i found a boyfriend and my girlfriends name is ...WTF!!!!!learn at least not to confound the genders all the fucking TIME!!!!and the overall this novel is TRASH..........................................................................

If anyone is confused by this novel and the one that has Senior instead of Patriarch in it, it's because I moved it from the fan-fic section as I placed there by mistake. I thought that was the place for original novels to go.

it's a nice story I must commend,the writing and character development is superb??.A nice story that would be loved by everyone,keep up the good work author?.

5...

I didn't learn how to use magic. Mom was convinced that all it would take was for me to swim, but no matter how much I swam, all I felt was water. Maxine said that she couldn't help me, because she only knew holy magic, and permanent spells were structurally different from cast spells. Maxine said that we should delay our holy magic lessons until after I learned how to access magic for cast spells to avoid confusing me any further. So, I couldn't sense Mom's magic, Maxine wasn't teaching me hers, and my own unique magic currently involved either biting people to death or almost killing myself.

I turned to my side and saw Prince breathing heavily. He must have been running to reach the top of this hill. I smiled at him and went to his side. I hugged him.

"Eh? Why?"

I experienced an unprecedented feeling, it feels so good! As expected, a virgin's pussy is indeed tight! I couldn't help but get the urge to ejaculate, but I restrained myself. I pushed further inside and felt my cock come up against her hymen. The girl tensed up.

Pero malabong mangyari yun eh. Sa ayaw at sa ayaw mo kailangan mong pagdaanan lahat. Yung sakit na nanamnamin mo sa hapdi.

Both of them left the store awhile Yuuichi saying.

I am hooked already and I'mma stay till the end. Curious to see how it goes for Peanut and the ending!! Keep it up please!! It's a refreshing story to read as the characters feel so lively with their own mindset and personality. Love how it's written.