Un-seasoned

This is a good book . The chapters need to be longer . Went through several chapters that could have been one chapter . The chapters I'm talking about are the ones at the Hales , they were drawn out into 19 chapters and could have 2-3 chapters . This is ridiculous after I use my coins that I just purchased I'm deleting this app it's not worth the time or money . In the past week I've read 5 on my 6th physical book . I think I'm going to stick with them .

A wonderful and well-written novel. The grammar was great as the sentences flowed nicely! As for the story, it was all well thought and unique compared to most novels on this site. This uniqueness would definitely pay in the long run. Hope you the best, the novel would be added to my library.

I am greatly enjoying the writing style of this story so far! The protagonist/narrator is funny and definitely feels like the age he's described as. The silver haired girl is strange but intriguing. I look forward to continuing to read through this story!

This story is really good, there are a lot of new plots every chapter and overall the design is really nice! I think this is the second best story I've ever read, behind I only level up, I suggest reading this!

This story has an interesting premise, and after reading a few chapters so far, I can say that I like the direction it is going in. There aren't many mistakes, and the ones that are there, it'sminor. I also like the MC of the story, the concept, and the setting, especially the world building. Overall, it's going well so far, keep up the good work and good luck!

This book is absolutely hilarious. I was cracking up on the first few chapters, the premise is quite unique as well, plenty of potential. The writing quality is quite high, very few grammatical mistake and a solid vocabulary. Definitely one to watch for the future!