It's not that bad 'disregard the reading status I went back' but it has a bunch of plotholes and the characters are shallow af. The MC is unrelatable it lacks a lot of the principles of the hero's journey (if you don't know what this is here's a link: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Hero%27s_journey) and it has a bunch of tangents of explanations. Idk if restarting or ending the novel right now, but I would suggest that the author continues the story and when done with the story reread, learn the mistakes, and if they still have the passion for writing, make a new one, that's my opinion thx. (P.S even though this sounds rude, read other novels and try to find plotholes and confusions and try to see how to fix them. Also judge all writing, even reviews like this one, but also remember about context) GL :)