To: Riley - Reviews

One thing that I like about this novel is, Is how you deliver what the MC doing, and thinking and also how you deliver it as a narrator. every chapter is long and it's a good thing also every title of your chapters literally would make the readers curious and excited to read more of it. to be honest it is my first time reading about a transmigration novel about modern sports. it feels unique and new to me.

Ahhh, what a waste. Such a good premise and good world, ruined by a retarded MC. Illogical actions and flaws in his personality just serve to infuriate the readers. I can't bear to read more than 20 chapters, and feel like jumping off a building. I guess only the retarded people are given chance at transmigrating to another world, as ordinary 'sane' folks would be too OP for the other world to contain. Ahhh, so much regret over this story.

Amazing story, the concept just works really well, the gramma is perfect and it’s an all round hidden gem. This totally deserves a read. :) ty

Though the story seemed serious, there is comic relief in it making me laugh while reading it.. ..Good job author with a good world along with cute and interesting characters. .. I loved it. .

I like this type of stories and  I wish the  ice queen proctet the ML and the Will live happily till eternity.and I think  Male lead must accept the love of FL.

I have not much to say about the story yet, except that I love the slow but detailed flow in every chapter. Looking forward to knowing more about the characters in the story, as well as their world!  Keep it up!!! :D

„Ok lastly do the other dungeons have the same naming scheme as the one that we will be using, and what are comman names that are used for the dungeons?"

Hao Yun shoved his left hand inside his pocket and grabbed a small black box then opening it. Inside was a silver ring with 'HYxML' engraved on its back portion. "We've already known each other for five years. I really need to step up my game and propose to her" he spoke to himself.

After all I-

"You're not sure.... Observe her." Mom making again a serious face.

"Sir, just give me the word, and I'll go to Russia to kick their asses myself. Pardon the French," a few more pronounced laughs.

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