Timeless Assassin - Reviews

I like the story

satisfaction please update the story

I literally only read like three pages and the grammar was so ba di checked if it was an original by someone learning English. Because, you know, I can at least understand that.But no. This is a paid translation.Not worth. Get an editor, or a better translator.I'd honestly be better off with MTL, in my opinion. It'd probably be the same quality but the words would get translated exactly.

I really hate the fact that we have to wait for the story to catch up to the original I already read up past chap 100 I say the story to me is a lot better than demons diary becuse it devolpes faster

where is fucking chapter man? 140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140

Shameless Author review my last novel was a dude because while I could imagine and plan out later arcs the beginning was too hard to right. This one will be different so try and stick for the ride.

A very interesting start, the storytelling style is unique and quite epic. Probably at the beginning, there is not enough specifics, but then the author gradually reveals his ideas. Good luck!

Very interesting concept! I’m impressed! The chapters are a reasonable length and grammar/writing is fair. I really enjoy the idea of Supplying a battle zone. it reminds me of Gourmet Food Supplier of Another World, but with a more sci-fi feel to it.Very nice!

exciting And interesting story,,keep up the good work author

If you don't like polyamory, don't read this story, it totally ruined the experience of reading this novel for me, they explain to you from the beginning of the work that the protagonist's mother created and gave birth to the protagonist because she wants her love and He looks for love without betrayal from her, that's why he didn't look for anyone else and only loves the protagonist, then why do you make the mother also have relations with her girlfriends, if from the beginning it was clear that he would only be with her, if not It's like she would have already had her own harem, and the girlfriends accept it anyway, if they make it clear that they are in love with the protagonist and the mother by going out a couple of times also makes her fall in love, what rubbish, at least it makes it clear that there will be all that In the synopsis, it screwed up my reading experience, I'm sorry for the words but this was very disappointing for me, I was loving the story so much :'v

In my opinion for author I think it can be improved ( by balancing the cultivation and the romance/harem)

"Its time."