The author undeniably lacks experience in crafting a novel. Although Shen Miao Qi may appear selfish and unlikable, upon closer examination, flaws become apparent in the storytelling. Yu Xiang, a transmigrator aware of her bleak destiny, wisely grasps the opportunity with Yu Pin Yan, showing prudence. However, readers can see a resemblance between her and the villainous Shen Miao Qi.
A modern-era transplant of 25 years, unaware of basic gender norms, seems implausible. It's hard to believe a wealthy, modern-day heiress is portrayed as noble but illiterate. The female lead, though cunning, skillfully manipulates her brother, gradually winning his affection.
Another flaw lies in the迷信 plot, where characters' fates are determined by a monk's divination. While it may seem compelling, the protagonist appears to exploit the villain's misfortune, turning the tables in her favor. The villain's selfish nature is evident, reducing her to a joke.
The male lead, though strong and wise, demonstrates limited emotional intelligence when it comes to the heroine. Initially, he finds solace in her care, especially given her broken legs and his family's burden. He neglects his duties in search of her biological sister, allowing the narrative to develop around the antagonist Shen Miao Qi, ultimately shaping a negative image of her and propelling Yu Xiang's growth.
The hero, enchanted by his "sister," struggles to maintain boundaries, particularly in an ancient setting, making his actions comical. In summary, the author fails to provide coherent reasoning for the protagonist's actions, portraying the hero as foolish rather than intelligent.