1 this might just be me being nit picky , but whatever the main character is using is not nen.Nen has restrictions on the user that allows the ability to be more powerful, take for example kuropika; can only use certain chains on the spiders or else he will die. By allowing the mc 100% talent at all types of nen you have practically ignored a key opportunity to define the mc. Because to me as of 10 chapters in the mc has no defining characteristics ,a jack of all trades does not always =god like, in this case it's just means there exist a character who can do what ever he wants withought the needs for justification.If you have read or seen HxH nen qualities is built off a characters personality(which cheredoe lacks) , and I concede to fact that this a hack system novel, however it still has to be logical. 2 This novel feels seriously jumpy, the mc just happens to meet several main characters if atg for seemly no reason withought hardly no space between each chapter. 3 I apologize to the author if this is found offensive, however I simply trying to give a honest and hopefully insightful review that might be of some use.
