The Villain Who Became Pregnant With The Alpha's Child - Reviews

I appreciate the translation, but the narrative doesn't resonate with me due to its deviation from my personal beliefs. The protagonist has been reincarnated into another person's body, but their original self (Og) is absent, and any mention of the past is limited to the chapters I've read so far. The relationship dynamics between the MC and ML develop swiftly, and the dramatic moments lack tension. What I particularly enjoy is the focus on the warm and supportive relationships around them. However, what I find less appealing is the overwhelming prevalence of善良 and bland characters, with the original MC portrayed as the sole antagonist, who seems to have vanished entirely.

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Who is the true villain here? Is it Og Body, ML, the second male lead, or the books? The situation with the White Flower uke is complicated. Despite Og Body's bullying, does he deserve to have his life ruined after losing his virginity, getting pregnant without a future, losing millions of dollars and parental inheritance, being coerced into prostitution, and facing false debts? The way ML and the second male lead handle the situation doesn't seem fair.

The narrative takes a turn when he survives, and instead of remorse, they mock him. They forget about the damage he caused and use his "revenge" against him, even involving his son Ha Neul. ML's actions, especially his interest in MC and the baby, are confusing, and the character development feels off. The writer should have clearly portrayed Og Body's despicable actions that justify his downfall.

As a reader, I didn't particularly like ML, despite some redeeming moments with Ha Neul. I read for their sake and the grandmother. However, the writer's perspective on ML's character, MC's relationship, and the progression of events is unclear. It's frustrating that everyone seemed to know Og Body's fate yet still冷漠ly observed, waiting for confirmation.

This whole situation leaves me shocked and disappointed. The characters' lack of empathy is truly annoying.

The experience differs from typical ABO stories. Our protagonist has transmigrated into an ABO novel, assuming the role of a villain who got pregnant after a one-night stand with the main character. The original villain intended to end their life, but instead, they become our new protagonist. This part aligns with common tropes, but there's a twist: in the original, after the villain's demise, the alpha male pair up, but this doesn't happen here. It's suggested that the MC's survival played a role, though the specifics are unclear.

The main character, our protagonist, is portrayed as resilient and resourceful, trying to adapt to their circumstances. So far, their decisions have shown logic, but time will tell if that continues. On the contrary, the male lead (ML) comes across as irritating. He's acted rather despicably towards the MC without a clear justification, leaving room for doubt about whether he'll change or apologize.

There's a spoiler: the ML took all the money the MC had, hoping they would succumb to despair and die. He even waited outside the inn where the MC was staying, only to be surprised when the MC survived. The translation might be comprehensible but occasionally leaves room for confusion.

Alright, having read this novel through Machine Translation, I'd say I probably like it. However, did I enjoy the reading experience? It might sound strange, but yes, I actually did. There's just one aspect that consistently bothers me as I read: the protagonist's seemingly easy acceptance of the male lead, despite knowing he's responsible for the original Eun-Yul's death. Eun-Yul may have been a villain, but he didn't deserve his fate – being pregnant and in debt wasn't a justification for the protagonist's reaction to his pheromones. It irks me that the protagonist can move on without guilt, especially since even the original character, Jeha, forgave him more readily. It's unclear why the male lead had to treat Eun-Yul so harshly in the story. That's my main issue with the novel.

Certainly! Here's the response in English:

"Alright, this novel is entertaining and a quick-paced read. However, it lacks substantial conflict, which left me slightly unsatisfied. Despite that, it's still an excellent choice. I would have appreciated more character development between the main character (MC) and the male lead (ML), as well as their connection with the child. The final chapters felt almost like an afterthought, hurriedly tied up. Overall, it's a delightful read for those who enjoy lighthearted stories, and I'd definitely recommend it."

To be honest, I'm at a loss for words... Although I appreciate the translation, the experience is quite challenging. The character names often get jumbled, pronoun usage can be confusing, and I find myself struggling to grasp the intended meaning. It seems like the essence of the story might be getting lost in translation, or perhaps it's just not resonating with me.

What also strikes me as odd is the main character's strong emotional investment in the male lead, despite being a transmigrated individual who isn't directly affected by the original protagonist's feelings. The way he reacts and expresses his emotions towards the ML gives the impression of a deeper connection, almost as if he's more than an outsider. His involvement extends beyond just his grandmother and child, which is unexpected.

I won't be rating it immediately, but I think I'll put it on hold for now.

My main problem lies in the portrayal of the ML character as the primary antagonist. As a result, I'm not particularly interested in the romantic aspect. The translation was a bit confusing, but if I understand correctly, during their engagement, ML essentially treated MC, who was originally seen as the 'bad guy,' like a sexual object. MC, it seems, developed feelings and tried to intimidate ML's fiancé (details unspecified) to break them up. MC was an orphan and, according to ML, had nothing but wealth, leading ML to plan to financially ruin and potentially push MC to suicide.

After the time travel (isekai), the plot twists unexpectedly. ML initially expected MC to have taken his own life, as his intention seemed to be to drive him to suicide. However, upon discovering MC survived, ML is impressed by his resilience and decides to stop tormenting him, even deciding not to marry his fiancé. Later, five years later, seeing MC with a child, ML claims MC as his omega and wants to be involved, which seems highly illogical.

The villainous label given to MC feels misleading, considering the events after the isekai. The villain's role might have been minimal or insignificant early on, and most of the story likely took place without them. The potential happy ending could involve ML marrying his fiancé right after pushing MC to ruin, even though there was no love connection, which raises eyebrows.

The reason for creating ML as such a cruel character is unclear. I don't support him, and it's unsettling how the narrative tries to make us empathize with his actions. In the end, the plot doesn't deviate much from the common trope of an abusive alpha chasing an omega who left while pregnant, so it's not unique in its clichéd nature.

This is an interesting tale, though it doesn't delve into the ABO aspect, which I appreciate. Initially, the main character (MC) might come across as a villain, but the story develops his growth, considering he lacks the memories of his past with the other main character (ML). Their personalities are quite clichéd – the cold yet caring wealthy CEO and the humble, proud, and resilient heroine.

The story earns a solid 3-star rating, but I bumped it up to 4 stars because the ABO background isn't exploited for plot points like segragation, marking, or bonding. There's no conflict or drama surrounding these elements. I would have appreciated more depth on the ABO aspects, as it could have provided a clearer understanding of the world and lessened the feeling of plot holes.

The baby is adorable, but I would enjoy reading more about the supporting couple. There are a few loose ends that bother me, such as the grandmother's connections and influence, and how MC's food seemingly cured ML's eating disorder. The fates of ML's half-sister, the political developments, and the second couple's relationship status remain unclear. It would be nice to have closure on these smaller details.

Lastly, while machine translation is used, it's still a readable story compared to non-translated content.

Although I read the story in machine-translated language, it was an intriguing read for me. Since my native language isn't English, I'll provide a review in English based on the MTL version.

The revenge plot against Sung Eun-Yul seemed overly dramatic. Though he was portrayed as a villain in the book, his main transgression was reportedly spraying pheromones (which affected Alpha Hyun Jeha negatively) – a relatively minor offense. Sung Eun-Yul, an orphan, managed to accumulate wealth, though the specifics aren't clear. The revenge story involved financial ruin, loan sharks, and ultimately, leading to Sung Eun-Yul's suicide. However, in this alternate timeline, the main character (ML) gave him a small amount of money as charity, which left Sung Eun-Yul struggling on the streets, pregnant and hungry, eventually finding a job at a restaurant.

What intrigued me was the MC's situation upon entering Sung Eun-Yul's body. Since the MC had already slept with the ML, it's unlikely that Sung Eun-Yul would have ended up pregnant and suicidal due to the same circumstances.

Sung Eun-Yul, who had access to the original novel and knew Kang Ha-Joon's background, might have been influenced by his knowledge of the ML. The MC feared the ML discovering the child, but he didn't harbor deep hatred for Kang Ha-Joon. The MC's misfortune had largely unfolded before his transformation, causing anxiety and guilt over Hyun Jeha's revenge, which was eventually forgiven after a misunderstanding.

Sung Haneul, the child, was a delightful character. Despite the challenges, Sung Eun-Yul provided a loving upbringing. The MC, prior to reincarnation, led a hard life, sharing Sung Eun-Yul's loneliness. As Sung Eun-Yul, the MC found companionship with his son and grandmother, which contributed to his quick affection for the ML.

When the ML confessed, he focused on moving forward, acknowledging that they couldn't change the past. He expressed remorse for his actions and vowed to improve, making the MC happy, hoping guilt would fade over time.

The narrative took a significant turn when the MC transformed into Seong Haneul. The story lacked a wedding between Kang Ha-Joon and Hyun Jeha, and the ML held his father accountable for his wrongdoings.

In summary, while the MTL version presented an engaging story, the character development and motivations were thought-provoking, particularly regarding the MC's experiences and the evolving relationship between the characters.

I确实觉得难以跟上，因为对话太多而描述不足。这导致我逐渐失去兴趣并放弃了。我不确定是翻译还是作者让我感到失望。

This appears to be a positive sentiment, but with a bit of disappointment. The user expresses excitement about the story but unfortunately cannot access the original novel due to login requirements, possibly needing a passport. They express their love for the story and are eagerly hoping for updates from the translator. They also mention feeling that the novel is underrated, as they are the first to rate it. Here's a rephrased version in English:

"It seems promising, but unfortunately, I'm unable to access the original novel; I've heard you need a passport to log in, which is quite unfortunate. I have a deep affection for this story, and all I can do is wait for the translator to release more chapters. I believe this novel deserves more attention, as I was the first to rate it."