The VeilBorn - Reviews

When is this novel going to end. It's really getting dragged.

Great novel......     ....... awesome character.............but it's mtl..........., football legends have been properly demonstrated.... ..

Enjoyable read.  Might not be the best but if you like VRMMORGP, it's enjoyable to read to pass the time. The MC got a cheat skill with 2 class abilities.  It is not overpowered.

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Characters were well developed and introduced so 5 star. I like how things seems unique but I know that it has at least an inspiration. I read the first few chapters and noticed that world background is slowly introduced and explained since it has an uncommon power standard world which most common fantasies makes so identical when it comes to world background. At least mostly, not all. I think I would recommend this to others since it has a new concept of becoming a system. It is more like he was reincarnated into a system and his life depends on his host which he nurtured and surprisingly, the host is not stupid and lovable. She actually learn things. That's all! Kudos my friend!

reviewing for the event fp. keep up the good work.

After the seatbelt incident, Caly brought back her wits and drover the car to the workplace of her subject. She put all her focus on the road and steering wheel to avoid an incident not just about the road but also her subject.

Nil immediately left the hall. He was in a very good mood and can't help but smile. The scolding he will received from his master and Bertolt was already on the back of his mind.

Samu, tentu saja. Siapa lagi yang bisa membuat Dhruv, yang mahakuasa, jadi boneka? Saya pikir monster hijau di dalam diri saya muncul.

"I think we will be practicing with another school." I turned to face Sil as a look of confusion graced his face.

I replied, "Hmm. I just hope my current one is okay and safe before considering another one. This little  child is formed by our love."

'RYO CALM DOWN...HE IS NOT YOUR BROTHER ANYMORE HE IS ENEMY COME TO YOUR SENSES', yelled Goku