the Unchaining - Reviews

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I am at chapter 640 mtl.The premise is thought out and the world is consistent in its self.He starts making reviews about the items he got and the system sets missions that gives him a power up.Every video he gets a mission that rewards him with Resistance. It makes him immune against mental and physical damage, blending on how many points he has and how powerful the attack is.This bonus fits well into the story. There is no secret government that wants his stuff since the world itself generates strange items.He fights against secret cults, evil organizations and cosmic enteties that want to destroy his planet.The first 200 chapters are fresh and new and interesting. But after that it gets dragged out. Till chapter 400 it gets stale since nothing is really happening and the open plot lines are not moving. At chapter 500s the plot finally starts moving again.It would have been better if the author picked up the speed of the plot.

Was hoping to find another good book to read, however it is the same as others. There is no spice in the characters or the plot ??? this is extremely disappointing.

fucking awesome! this is what a great story should read like ! love it ! this needs to be made into a movie , the author is a genius , a visionary , a pioneer in originality . yo this novel is really good  , immersive , thrilling and exciting , keep it going and keep it coming , i'm hungry for more , don't tease me , give me satisfaction , i need more chapters !

[Shameless author note detected] Hello dear readers, I hope you will enjoy my new novel taking place in a pirates world. If you're here to see a nice heroine, sweet, fair and pure well...don't open this book. My female lead is ruthless, sadistic, evil and will never hesitate to kill for her own goal (and her crew). ATTENTION this book is a harem, I will develop a lot the relationships to not make them rushed or secondary like what you can read in some yuri novels outthere. If you already read my other novel "The Legend of the ruthless Empress Freya" you know that my characters are known and appreciated for their authenticity and because they seem more real than real. So don't hesitate, on board and follow the next adventures of the sadistic Captain Hestia ! Author-san Lucifer ? P.S : if you don't like harem, try it I'm sure I can change some minds with this one and if you still don't like it, try my other novel that is not harem (still yuri). Enjoy~

"Nope but you could at least struggle a little maybe try to fight back. Why don't you throw a punch at me again." Siegfried stuck his chin out baiting Jason to throw a punch at his outstretched jaw. The whole time a wide grin on his face.

I should've started running

Eventually, Miyako timidly opened her mouth.

So what's wrong with taking the back streets?

I have only read the first chapter but I think I got the gist of the novel. The system is a choice system where it will give different rewards depending on the options chosen like the system in TTP. Unlike TTP this mc will always choose the "action every chapter" option. Conclusion, if you werent a fan of TTP you will probably love this novel. (or I could be completely wrong and this review is useless as I have only read 1 chapter.)

Amazing story so far just a bit confused with his abilities are what level they are.try to write an auxiliary on the ignisis abilities.cant say much about the world background but it's only the start.And if your having writers block just read novels or manga that revolve around animal or best evolution.keep up the good work.

So far the story is great, writing is organized and I’m loving the world building of the story!