The Ultimate Star

The description of the story is not too helpful in 'describing' the story but after reading few chapters I say it has potential.though some doubts is the mc 20 or 26 and is the cultivation world hidden or is publicly known.

At first i didn't want to read this due to the bad reviews but i figure ill give it a shot and see how the first 100 chapters go and i have to say those people that gave this novel a bad review are either retarded or stupid. Infact i gave this novel a way higher review than the mmorpg guardian. Which is a very similar novel. Ok the base is WoW but was it a straight copy paste hell no. Sure the intro was weak as hell but the MC never lost sight of the whole reason for his exiatance. The novel manage to keep on topic despite the game info. And the way the game info was used was really good too. So much so that i feel they should submit this to WoW and get it officially published. Anyways 5 star very worth the read. Refreshing to read a book based on a game i played for a few years. Thanks bought back some really fond memories of the game for me.

This is identical to Underworld Gamers. ? do these people just copy and paste but change slight details? I was hoping for something more creative but it’s basically the same except in space. There’s even “dark” goblins being referenced as cheap labor. Wonder where they got the ideas for goblins? ? this is such a pathetic copy and paste novel. It’s like copyrights have no meaning to these Chinese novelists. Let’s say, even if this novel came first, (which maybe it did) it still doesn’t change the fact that this is nearly identical to Underworld. It’s even got the whole earthlings reviewing the game aspect. What a disappointment.

This is a well written novel that i would recommend to anyone looking for very likeable characters and good writing quality. the story is fun so far as the mc try to know the world around him and develop his own skills. its an enjoyable read, you wont be disappointed.

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Overall your story is great; it’s written well, and the story is interesting. The only suggestion I have would be to have a chapter where all the sci-fi names/machinery are listed and explained (much like how FCS was explained in chapter 14 iirc). Or make guide us into familiarity by allowing us to grasp each new abbreviation before introducing another term.I love sci-fi, but even this was a little hard for me too follow in the later chapters.The scene with the old man and police officer was rather funny; I would’ve commented, but it kept loading!Anyway, will be following this!