Completed the story so review time....Guess the story can be split into 3 ish parts. Earth, Holy City, and the "Land".The Earth part of the story feels the weakest to me since it is where the characters are the most stupidly unreasonable. (see my comment below where I quoted the stupid/inconsistent stuff as well as general thoughts during it). One thing not mentioned is how some characters (*Ahem* Solomon and Carolyn *Ahem*) are seen as being "smart" whilst most the times it is just using their position of power to do the most basic (and usually obvious) things with it. With a constant "I am in control" even in situations where they CLEARLY didn't expect something.The Holy Land part is better for sure, still some confusion on how people act but overall is fine.The "Land" is the best section, while there is unreasonableness it is toned down and often somewhat understandable.
