The Space Between: Under the Surface - Reviews

It is enjoyable to read this story as the plot is flowing nicely. The consistency of the main charactets can be maintain properly. I hope the update can be faster.

Everything would be fine if not for the mc's attitude, dude this is a fanfic you should've made him an alpha, It's irritating to see our Idol acting like a beta male.

amazing, the revenge is the plot so difficult. but you can written this story.. so i will give you big applaus..semangat terus ya kak.. semoga bisa jadi pemenang.

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"After the death of the first generation, there was no longer any pure Cold or Heat. In light of this, an unforeseen event occured when the orbs belonging to these clans turned red and broke apart, leaving behind Phyrraium."

It was annoying at first, but now it somewhat becomes a ritual and their entertainment. As about why they think the fact that someone trying to kill their father is funny... one because they knew that their father is strong. Two, they knew that the boy is not really trying to kill their father anymore.

"It's time we are together now.. .so what do you think us starting to build a family life together?"

        "Rain, pahatid ko na kayo sa driver namin, lasing pa kayo para magdrive." Offer ni Kent. Ang pula na ng mukha nito dahil sa kalasingan. Mestizo kasi ang lahi.

"No relation…at least, not to the man that just flashed through your head. He is no one at all, just another Ryoka. I will erase him. Then it will be over…"

melt it. I kicked him in his stomach and moved onto the next guy. Then they all started shooting and thats when I put the wall back up, but I was covering me and the girl. "You're not hurt are you?" I glanced around her tiny frame. She lifted her shirt and a a bloody cut was seen on her lower torso. "Okay I have to take these guys out, when I'm done, i'll come and heal you alright?" She nodded and curled herself into a ball.

"Ditolak."

"What about my boo-boo?" Sherry yelled.  "I got hit in the head."