The Shattered Crown" - Reviews

This has only begun recently,  but it has already grabbed my attention,  by making me speculate on some of the people,  that the lead character has met so far; whereby and how that their actions will have an impact on the coming Apocalyptic events.I am so looking forward to reading more.

Cliche overpowered MC. Cliche plot buildup. Not interesting enough. Writing feels contrived. Romance falls flat. Sigh. Got through the first fifty chapters give or take and didn't really feel anything at all other than disappointment.

because someone asked and corrected my novel, so I made this statement. I have fixed the synopsis, hopefully it will be easier to understand. let me tell you a little plot. so actually there are two story lines, from 2 different novels. one is EEWAO and another is New World which I haven't published yet. the stories of the two novels are interconnected and when EEWAO is finished I will publish New World novel that I myself feel is very very good, because there are lessons in history, culture and so on from all over the world.I created EEWAO to remember my game friends and improve the quality of my writing before I published New World. so I hope when I make New World, the quality will be better. btw I am still learning to write, so your review is very useful for me.

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Shen Li remembered the first time he had met her, it was on the battlefield. She had even a determined look, this fierce will to live. He knew he could not change her mind. He advanced took the hand of his wife and passed him love and qi. His wife looked at him then suppressed with love. She knew she had made the right choice in choosing this man. The wise woman looked

- Well I guess I owe you one.

"True, true," Payton conceded. "But I'm going to Bora-Bora with you—that says something, doesn't it?"

The first to initiate the conversation this time was Angel, holding a lavender-colored lunch box on her right hand and a purse in her left, obviously belongings of Mizuki.

"Kurasa seperti itu, lebih baik kau segera menemuinya, dia sudah menunggu lama. Kalau begitu saya permisi dulu." bersamaan dengan kepergian pria itu, Yoona langsung melangkahkan kakinya menuju lantai tiga. Tak terdengar lagi olehnya teriakan dari pelayan yang sedang memanggilnya, dirinya sudah terlanjur berlari menaiki tangga.

"I hear you're a good artist too," She responds, "Someday I'll need portraits painted of Bill and I for posterity's sake. You do take commissions, don't you?"

Blake was amazed by all of this. He really wanted to learn about himself and what would happen to him in the future. Later he realised that April might be waiting for him.