The Primordial Record - Reviews

I started reading because it had the 'Kingdom Building tag', but the first volume has none of that. It's a survival race with zero explanations about anything; you're thrown into a story about gods. I had to reread several chapters to grasp a bit... by the end of the first volume, I'm like should I continue this or just drop it because it was quite exhausting...

How can you compare that trash to this gem

U sure have gut thiker then Earth..
If you want to compare someone to other you have to talk about senior... This novel new release.. Obviously this is good..
But...Infinity mana was release almost 3/4 years and this one just few days ago...
So...
This novel have galactic war and god concept..
But befor this novel...
Infinity mana had this all elements..
So...
I said...
This novel had same concept from Infinity mana,just little different.
Now new novel are releaseed and they are more advanced and Knowledgeable..
But you cant forget your ROOOOOOOOOOT..
when we were reading thus old released novel...this type of new release novel Didn't even exists..
So..
i was saying..
Author took some fragments from infint mana, becuz i found.,..
Also many new novel got inspired from old movel..even old one is trash..BUT
BUT
..INSIDE THIS TRASH..
THERE ARE GOLD.
AND JEWELS CAN'T MADE WITHOUT MIXING TRASH..

TBH i would enjoy this amazing filler chapters if THERE WASNT 200 MORE CHAPTERS LIKE THAT IS ONE DAY OF READING FOR ME :/

Hi everyone,
Author here.
I am not comfortable giving reviews on my own work, it feels a lot like self adulation to me (Which I've always likened to narcissism.)

Anyways let's go to the reason why you are here. The book. Er... no, the review for the book.

The Primordial Record is not a fast paced book. But because it's a web novel, I tried to skim across overly long descriptions, to make a tighter story. I may have failed, you my dear readers would be the judge of that.

Based on the settings of my book, which is Transmigration. The MC is swamped in a flood of deceit and lies. And because I made him overpowered, I had to balance that with really dangerous enemies, that understands the capabilities of the MC and make every confrontation a deadly affair. I abhor weak and stupid antagonist.


From the start he would be placed in a unfavorable position and he would need every wit and cunning he possess to win.

I would not be leaving obvious hints, I left many Setups and I trust my readers to figure them out as they proceed with the story, for I am a fan of puzzles, and if you stick around long enough, I hope you would be surprised by the Payoffs.

The Primordial Record may not be an easy book to read, and I sincerely apologize for that. I left details of certain abilities and the world itself vague, as it is a huge world and I dont like info-dumps. There are many horrifying themes presented inside and spoilers warning. I am willing to kill off characters, if it would serve the story.

I hope you enjoy this world. Because ultimately that is the reason I write. For your pleasure.

Bricktrader.

Definitely one of the best novels on here, amazing posting speed and unique powersystem. This book has realms of strength that normally would be the end of other books, it gets there pretty fast but doesnt seem rushed. Love it

Novel starts off in a rush where nothing makes sense really with a lots of twists out of the norm.

I stuck with it because of all the recommendations and reviews, and it all ties into this master-crafted story where everything has started tying in.

As of chapter 460 I can say I absolutely am more than excited to see where this journey goes.

Nigerian authors are very few... it's nice to know we're not alone. Nice story bro.

Details which make no sense. Using words on words, power levels which have never been introduced . Contrasting yourself within the first 14 chapters ( magic can't stay hidden , children show reality bending power) then in the next few chapters oh only noble bloodline can use supernatural . oh legendary get 150 year lifespan , legend is first level but of domain , but in next chapter nop only specific domains can make you live longer .... Ranks have never been introduced, the writing style is annoying and the  mystery feels forced instead of having anticipation I am cringing at how hard the author is trying and failing at iy

I love the way you write! The story is well-paced, and I like how the scenes are written and described. Especially how you described what the protagonist was feeling along with the well-written dialogue, this is a good read! Keep it up! ^^

only read upto 4 chapters because of daily recommendation .too much unnecessary details . boring or my mood is just off. first 3 chapter were about surrounding object like corpse , luxurious doors , big expensive mirror etc. i couldn't focus because situation of MC doesn't seem tiny bit desperate or serious so why useless details .

worst novel just info dump.i have read 100 plus chps but still just info dump you can't even get the basic outline of the world just don't waste your time like me .