The Plot is Wrong! - Reviews

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A sweet novel that deserves to waste my time, but oh animal, it is necessary to stop it and re-adjust it from the beginning and the new. I currently consider it a fall, my stupid brother????

DON'T MISS THIS ONE...... LITERALLY..This is one hell of a story, I don't know how it will progress but till now it's mind-blowing.   The story development, world background it's seamless. the characters are alive in great sense(read it, feel it), it's perfect (for me). Im not gonna mention anything about inside of story, just read the 1st chapter and believe me you'll love it.

This novel manages to blend a sophisticated narrative style with entertaining dialogue, which is quite the feat. The setting of this story is wonderfully described, and the characters are memorable. Development wise, this story seems to be taking things slowly (very slice of life like), and that's not bad at all. It allows us readers to get familiar with the characters and their world. In short, I'd def recommend this novel if you're interested in a gaming novel. Keep up the good work author :D

Very good so far. Grammatically some things could be changed but overall the story flows very nicely. Sometimes it is a bit rushed but I believe transferring worlds is really hard to do in a fluid way. Overall a great novel and much better than a lot of the higher ranking titles.

For those of you who wonder why you have this novel in your bookstores. It's simple, I deleted the content of the other novel that had no future and I'm going to use it for this new novel. You are free to stop following this novel, I don't care at all (well, a little yes, XD), but I hope you can at least give it a chance. Thanks for your time.

After reading all the arrogant young masters in all cultivation novels, the MC here feels like the cream of the crop. For some reason, I like his character and personality. He pursues vanity to the extreme but has his reasons to be grounded and not have his head buried up in the clouds.The writing style is smooth and flawless and the choice of words make it a refreshing read. This is definitely a novel I am reading every single day.

Nice story really with likeable characters.. many people complained about mc being system's slave though i don't think it's true. only incidecnce it happening was when system gave a weird trait(which was taken off very soon) .. the systems don't give anything to mc in silver platter instead takes fair price. although I've only read about 52 chapters , I think it's great

Chen pivoted on his heel, forcibly crashing his sword against his opponents. He didn't hesitate. He stepped into the attack, lifted his leg and swung it around. His foot came into contact with Yijun's leather armour on his side, ultimately catching the boy off guard. His strength gave him the upper hand. He was able to throw Yijun off balance.

"Coming." I said.

" Do not worry ... you will not cease to exist, you will continue with the techniques of Goku and Vegeta. Practically you will have everything you have now, only that in time you will lose the feelings and emotions of Goku and Vegeta before your friends and family. " The Chief of Namekusei spoke.

"Listen here you little prick if you don't wanna come you don't have to we don't even know you. And it's not like that freak for a daughter of mine has anyone left but that little fucker. She's probably just guilt tripping him to stay her friend anyway."