THE PERFECT FORM - Reviews

1. the translation is **** 2. the mc has no brain cells 3. the mc is a pedo4. the mc is sexsist 5. and it doesn't get any betterwsfsfsfsfsfsf

Translation is messed up but good character and story development all around ????????????????????????????????????????????????

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The book is amazing so far, but I think it needs some plot development. I like how the chapters end off on cliffhangers, which I personally like. I wish they could express more details of his rivals, but it's still really good. If this book had an actual Pokemon game with it, with the same storyline, I would buy that game ASAP. DrxpyBoy, I'm really excited for your upcoming chapters! :)

OMG, I really didn't see it coming. Wow, the plot is truly amazing, its a really mesmerizing style of writing and the dialogues...<3Loved it, pls keep the issues on a regular basis!

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Sadly starts great then the writer gets lazy and just copy and paste battle scenes only changing names/slight descriptions. I was really enjoying this book until then. ?

"Phoenix, what's that nice..."

The guy asked the doctor which is called physician in here to check the pulse of hers. The guy pulled down the blanklet from her face to her shoulders and take her left hand out .  The physician then take out something from the box and it was a small tiny pillow to rest on her hand for him to easily to take her pulse.  

[Save the two individuals]

Leo: "What are you doing today? Yesterday we had the tutorial. What now?"

If she was moving away, then why didn't she tell me about it?