THE PALE MONARCH - Reviews

continue this one is very nice novel.............…5………5............................... ...............................................................

Can’t follow who is talking half the time and the story seems forced to make it move alongPlus MC told to keep his bloodline a secret yet it seems he tells his brother and sisters Sorry not sure like I said the story you can’t tell who is talking half the time plus the story seems to jump suddenly from one point to another

I wish this I could read this novel somewhere else if webnovel isn’t gonna do it. It’s has a very nice and calm Plot which you can fall back to when you’re tired of all those action plots and constant plot twists e.t.c.

I dropped it at chapter 4 …. If you can read past that then you will enjoy it .. maybe( as mc is clueless everyday chinese)

WARNING NOT FINISHEDI really enjoyed this story despite all the gender mix ups after ch40. my main issue is the story just stops, there is no ending just a massive cliff hanger in the middle of an arc. I hope others cam save their money because I was very disappointed. the development and concept were great and I was looking forward to see how it all was suppose to finish.

MC is a bit of a hypocrite, anyone who uses women as tools are scum unless its him then its only natural to do so. Doesn’t fawn over every fairy he see’s which is nice but no matter how amazing of aloof and cold the woman is they because dunces the moment they meet the MC and choose to be his slave which is dumb but oh well. MC is like Changge from “I am the fated villain” except for this guy chooses to be borderline scum while Changge has to be because of his inheritance and system

I like this novel more than the "beginning after the end " for the sole fact that the mc is not totally powerless when crisis strikes the overall quality is good but it would be even better if there was more romance involved

The story is a beautiful background, and this kind of tastes also coincides, its main character has a combination of imaginative and happy and powerful, in the whole novel.

Fang Lana was taken aback when Zhen Xiaoling uttered the words. She smiled at Zhen Xiaoling and said  "Okay, okay." Zhen Xiaoling gasps and tug Ding Luo's sleeves. "Did you hear that? She spoke to me like I'm a child. Baby, do something." Ding Luo can only sighed. Speaking to himself 'Dear wife, its you who are behaving like a child now.' Not getting any response from Ding Luo, Xiaoling turned her head to look at Mrs. Ding with pleading eyes.

"ARAY ANO BA?"

'Jung jötun kommen!'

  "Thank God! River, hurry, she's awake!" I open my eyes finally and see I'm in a hospital, fuck.