the other half - Reviews

20Th birthday picked up a little girl, 10 Years later he is only 24. Some hut shit here. Mad respect to the MC. The Translator or the Author must be trolling.

EndlessMTL Translation made my head hurt so much....This novel would have been average with a good translation but with this trashy one i can't even read ....

this seems like something a 10-12 years old would write....and the way its written too.... a lot of logic erors too.... the way to beat a high defense is to add range??? a lot of fake reviews too......

So, from the first 5 chapters I have read till now, I have felt the following opinions:1) I could immediately find and relate to the storyline2) The mc has gained some depth to his character already3) Some words need to be changed to make it better sounding. I lost my immersion into the story a few times when certain words couldn't bring out the intended effect4) The mental state of the mc has not been fixed. It's like he can read too much into a situation, trust others easily ( I'm not sure about this point, but something about the MC's behavior put me off a bit)5) but the story is quite immersive, it may not seem like a unique plot but it sure is interesting to read. I'm completely hooked up to the plot. ???

Author!... Translator?EVERYONE!?Why... Why!? Why does the MC, not ask at all about compensation!? It is a job! He even read the contract!What was his compensation? Is he being paid? Is he gaining abilities? going to live forever while working? Something? I need adequate compensation! He is working directly with a god! CMON!

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nah man. it had good potential but it became another Chinese novel with those cringe mc with cringe stories pretty quick

Huge potential but a bit childish in the story development. the main problem though is the writing quality. Names change, you go from past tense to present tense each lines. It's sad but I hope the author will make improvements because his idea is gold

Origins of bottling

The Prince sighed. This was not going to be fun. If he could only plan their strategies without having to step foot on the stage, then he'd be fine. But no, Earth's Yuri decided to be a star and now everyone expects great things of him.

She appeared at the altar, leaving the disciples of Evanesce Aptitude in awe.

abnormalities.