The Night I Teleported Into Her Bedroom - Yuri ( GL story) - Reviews

Yeah a sports novel! I liked the first chapters. The system seams a bit boring at the moment, but I'm sure that it will be expandet with new functions and stuff.

damm. This is a really beautiful novel that has a very light comedy tone. The author played the story very well from the first few chapters alone. The other people might be annoyed by the system because it just exists for comedy purposes. The system is like a rebellious teenager. That is just my first impression of this novel. Just great.

Wait, I forgot to do the review for reading all the chapters hahaha, let me tell you, it hooks me up since the first chapter! Sometimes I even forgot to leave a chapter or paragraph comments, I can even read it again and leave it, just in case... I'll continue reading, I like the steady space that you give to your writing, and the development is great! Keep going my dear Author! I'll cheer you up!

An interesting fan fic of ATG and Bleach. When I was reading the first 20 or so chapters there was many times I felt the urge to cringe but after those chapters I feel like the story has found its tone and rhythm which now has made it one of my favorite fan fics on Webnovel ☺ So if you can get past the initial hurdle in the first few chapters you will find a well written and enjoyable story ? Keep up the good work! ?

I like the story,,please author,,continue what you've been started,,this story is unique for me??,,I always like this kind of story,,so sad that you drop it down?☹️

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"Oh, really? Is it a girl or boy?"

She stepped out into her courtyard with her sandals and went to the tree she had fallen off from in her training yesterday.

Irene - What's wrong with him?

This time, he felt a noticeable change in the air, his ears hearing the audible sound of someone swallowing before the door knob gradually began to turn.

Morgana smirked, but Sig' was amazed, if it was him, he would have already hit that dwarf until he was unable to talk anymore.

Soon the subject dressed in black came out, but he had a fierce look