the story looks good but the grammar upsets me :c, also some sudden turns in the naration, like going from he to i in the middle of the naration lowers the seriousness of the work. Some concepts are partialy badly exlplained, but lets say thats part of the story.Author should reread his work a bit more
NGL I'm kinda upset about all these VRMMO(?) novels popping up everywhere. The thing is... video games don't matter. So when the entire plot is just a guy playing a video game 24/7, I can't help but wonder... what exactly is the point of these novels?
????A sinister novel, the events were exciting, I liked the character of mc, who is immoral and unscrupulous, he is a cruel person, the construction of the world is interesting, I have high expectations for the future of this smart villain, I hope you will continue to produce more chapters
Honestly my favorite book ever. The details are great and I love how beautifully the scenery is described. I personally love when the characters go on tangents about their weapons and explain the origins and what they do. I’d love to see someone make an animation that sticks directly to the book word for word. I loved it so much I’m indulging in as much media about it as possible and I’m also researching the other 3 Classical Chinese pieces of literature so I can start reading them next.
The book is just too fascinating. I enjoyed your descriptions of each scene and unknowingly started picturing it. The way words were used was fascinating. I can only say that it is a piece of art.A good job, author
If you like transmigration stories where main character is not a beta, and a pushover, and you are searching for romance in another world theme this might be it, it can be gore on some chaps, because the world building which gets established as the chapters go on. What I like most are the characters and the recent chapter just got me, as the author suddenly killed someone I thought that would be a long term side character, but I guess he was just not. But I'm feeling more for the story as it goes on, it's packed with emotions in it. Chapters vary in lengths but they are all satisfying.I recommend these to isekai lovers, I loved it, you'll love it too. Supporting you author! Keep updating! I'm loving the chapters!
Currently at chapter 33/33 and it's a very good story so far. Becoming stronger actually involves hard work. The mc seems to a human with a brain. Looks very promising.