The Invincible Full-Moon System - Reviews

So…I’m on the 17th chapter and while the story’s been great so far, it hasn’t warranted the 5* review I’m currently giving.

What warrants this 5* review is my pity towards the author for having to deal with so many readers that don’t pay attention. As I said, I am on chapter 17 and I’ve lost count how many times people have attempted to fix the author’s “errors” for things they didn’t pay attention to. There have been explanations to all stat changes, or lack there of yet these readers constantly believe they know what they are talking about which then leads to further confusion as other readers begin to believe what they say.

Sorry author, story’s great and I have plans on catching up, hope you the best.

Story is good,  mc is an idiot.  Soo many plot holes and inconsistencies.  Mc is all about himself one minute next he isn’ and vise versa.  Harem is okay, but once again dense mc.  It’ okay but would save your fp for better stories

After reading up to 300 chapter…It still annoying that author forget reward items from completing the mission.
Another thing is development between Mc and Fmc is very bad. Mc already made her female alpha and kiss her once and they go back to same relationship as before.
But main thing to offset me is the rewards items. Do not give reward items if you will forget to use it

The MC is very stupid and all the side characters are almost as useless as him. I just feel sorry for the people who paid coins to read this trash. All in all, I wouldn't recommend this to anyone.

is there a discord for this novel.......

The Mc is honestly just disgusting he just stands there and watch the supernatural civilians get raped by humans and even lets the humans go and don't get me started on what he did to the assassin siblings, and he acts like humans are the good guys what a hypocrite there is no saving someone as disgusting as hm.

I liked this story until the moment when the mc became a pathetic simp...................................................................................

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11 reveiws all 5 star

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Negtives

Awfull grammer
Stale dialogue
Mental deficient Mc
The world has terrible common sense

Positive

Has potential if the author just downloads Grammarly

author the mc could be more proactive with the girls , he has to be an alpha not a dense protagonist author the mc could be more proactive with the girls , he has to be an alpha not a dense protagonist

This novel is... Not great. The grammar Is so painfully bad that I can’t actually read anymore. Mistakes here and there are fine, but literally every sentence takes me out of it. Please if you write a book at least use grammarly or something. Also the writing has been... bad. Often times the author skips foreshadowing and straight up says “something is going to happen” before it happens and without foreshadowing. Its absolutely frustrating.

Dialogs are dull, characters are one dimensional and i can't describe how much dumb mc is. He's literally walking through the fire and can't comprehend why the person in front of him is surprised.
World background is okay, to some extent it's interesting.
Overall i wouldn't recommend it unless author revise it

mc a simp and that alone makes me hate the novel and if you wondering why I gave it 5 star is because author deletes reviews that show the bad side of his work