The Golden Rule (Collaboration Novel)

Legit , best story , I've read so far  ,...................,............................................... . ....         ..................

Why are you stealing the hard work of others? To all those who don’t know, this novel is already completed on another site and this is not the original author

Sigh. It has a good start but too long and windy middle part. The characters are a but flat and yeah, even the choice of heroine is so bad. Sigh. Seems writer is fantastical about rich and glory and typical rich man life.

Advice "At least be selfish for your own sake, if it's advantageous for the sake of strength then do "beneficial" things like fawning over the young master/princess. if it's just an ordinary person do you want to be "robinhood" come on be selfish for yourself. good but if you do it many times it might look "disgusting".

There is too little detail, and then there is too much. Personally I felt this novel was moving along at a very slow pace, and everything was described toooooo much. You could literally skip an entire chapter and read only the last paragraph and basically miss nothing. NGL, story was really good, but it either needs to be sped up/trimmed or needs a thousand more chapters so readers can skim through the hundreds of fluff and useless/boring info that is often regurgitated. I.e. We don't need to know every characters facial expression, nor do we need something that can be described in 5 words, to take 100+ words.Still, really good story, just wish it was less padded and more to the point.

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