Author here. There are areas that could use refinement, particularly in pacing. I welcome any questions you have about the story and i hope you enjoy the read!
The chapters are too few, and it’s just not enough to quell my thirst in the meantime. I really hope there will be daily updates.....otherwise
Keep updating ?
No entiendo en algun momento del capitulo 20 se perdio el autor, la historia paso de primera persona a tercera persona como un cuento luego de ahi se fue todo en picada dropeado
