the forgotten man - Reviews

the story's plot is great but author needs to increase the ratio which she updates, can't wait for more chapters

A million girlfriends, new one every 3-6 months - Its the most annoying thing in this novel, ruining story for me. Does mc have nothing better to do? His loyalty is non existent, its a miracle he is still loyal to humanity and not a retard traitor like mc in Avatar or smth.

Good ff, keep it up  ??                                                                                                                  

Like my review for no reason... I don't know what to expect from the novel... But the cover looks like the album cover of an 80's pop star....

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Writing Quality - Top notch.Update - So far, so good. Although it relatively new.Story Development - Excellent so far.Character - Well written and designed.World Background - The layout is great so far.Keep up the good work.

Ngl came here to do a supportive friend comment , but it's actually so interesting to read and I genuinely enjoyed reading through the story so far it's got great ideas going into it already. Super cool :)

I like how the story is developing, it was slow but progressive.  A good plot, but I need time to say for sure how the story progresses. If Author-san releases more chapters, we can enjoy the continuous read.

Just the title alone is interesting and I'm expecting lots of incredible moments in this one. The book may lack chaps as of the moment, making the world background and story progression somewhat unclear, but I'm confident enough to say that this book will end up great, considering the author's skill with his craft. I'll leave this here to tell future readers not to miss this one.

After looking at Veer for a long time, finally, Priya mumbled "Can't you just bless me to take my rebirth as you did with sister Shri? Why should I keep waiting like this?"

Seth who is on the ground just listen and slowly crawl his way to the kitchen, before Rebecca remembered about Seth he was all ready gone. "Hoho…. He thought he could just run without cleaning this mess..... He is totally mistaken." Elizabeth saw her aunt's terrifying look and knows how this will end. "Finally, I'm out at last." Said Seth in a happy tone, then he heard a phone call in the phone booth, "It's her call.... Should I take it or not?...." Seth is thinking hard in what to do, then an answer struck on his head, "Im taking it...… LIKE HELL I WOULD!!!!!"

It's my mistake becca is my baby sister I can't let her punished..