The First to Fall ⚢ - Reviews

I really enjoyed this story so far, i really recommend this story for reading. ????❤️????

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Hi Fallen Ghost!I have to say that I am amazed with the storytelling style. Each chapter was packed with action and narration. While one would expect the narration to be mere fillers, it actually contains in-depth details about this world of magicak kingdom where the story takes place.Lindley the protagonist was a very cheerful and modestly happy guy at the beginning but things quickly took a dark turn right at the first chapter.The story pace was amazing and engaging. The grammar and structures are impeccable. Readers who like magical medieval stories with magical beasts and leveling and system should definitely stop by! Extremely well-written story, wonderful job!

Cool start!!! Non-trivial, fascinating plot and I hope for a further interesting storyline. I'm looking forward to more chapters. Highly recommend!!!

The beginning is a bit boring and banal, but over time (quite quickly) it gains depth and evolves like MC.The characters are lively and interesting, the world: the more you learn about it, the more you want to know.The whole novel is very pleasant, the only thing that bothers me a lot is Elisa, I'm not talking about the character but rather about her negative impact on the MC, in my opinion, and I think his titles would agree with me hah.

All in all, it was a very interesting read, a really chaotic evil mc. Until Yura came into the picture and it completely broke the immersion for me, every time time she appears he acts completely out of character without her adding any value at all. I understand it might change later, but after a few times I couldn’t keep up the interest

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I love your story too much , everything is fine, world, story development and so on, but i hate when MC is a chess piece rather then players( I know they are his parents) but what value you get when your son is grinding and as a parents you are watching like movie, just stop this shit author, MC should do his own journey rather then going through their parents plan,, I'm dropping after 49 chapters..if you write next novel, I'll read then, i don't want waste my coin on this pre-planned parents baby shit

its everything i need to read right now ?????????????????????????????????????????????????????

Shuyang just nodded while comfortably leaning his head on Zhiyong.

They would not have sufficient strength to continue moving about and protecting themselves as well."

"You're right to be suspicious, but they really did let all that go after what you guys did," Kisuke said surprising Ichigo.