The First Time Daddy - Reviews

Wish-fulfillment catering to children, and teenagers. Or in other words, a power fantasy about how being popular in life is all you need to be happy. Your sense of self-worth can only grow with the approval of random strangers! Don't forget - the real world is useless, what matters is the online world! Please note the sarcasm. This novel is ridiculous. The very concept of it is disgusting.

The first part where the MC ate the holy reward kinda hurt, and I noticed some people got mad as well in the comments but I’m VERY glad I kept reading. This has become one of my favorite reads on this app. It’s a comedy-action series, where the MC is basically Saitama from One Punch Man but he actually starts getting recognition slowly. Its sooo satisfying each time as well. Also not just the MC but the side characters are also getting huge buffs by simply following the MC, which most of his companions were enemies or unlucky people that the comedy uses to further show MCs power. All in all it’s a great read.

The world-building is amazing and I hope the author continues to keep it that way, a very intriguing story. The writing is amazing and I highly recommend the story, Keep up the good work author!!

The writing style is amazing. English is perfect for me.This is my first time following a gaming novel, but I know it will be good because the author's other novel is also very interesting. This author writes very well action scenes and gives you a good picture of the world through his words.  I highly recommend this to everyone!

Thank you for rewriting this great fanfic here’s 2 Power stones

I really am a sucker when reading zombie apocalypse! This novel kinda reminds me of left four dead, so I expect a lot of great things here in the novel and its succeeding chapters. However, there are some points I'd like to discuss. You need to establish the virus and its background. How it was created. Who created it. When did it started. Although you could start with the apocalypse right off the bat, someone must explain what happened and what are zombies. Zombies are undead creatures that we all know and love, but you still need to explain what are those walking corpses and add something out of it. Grammars and such can be learn so I'll leave that part out of the way. Kudos for the author!

That was a good dream, Miss Linze.

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"Apa menyukaimu adalah kesalahan?" gumam Sehun terlihat lelah.

'So, Su Bao liked/loved that guy Qu Cheng who was trying to court her. Though Sara treated him harshly she could see that he was not getting over her. Probably the inferiority towards Sara made Bao plot against the her.'

Jennie places ramen in a bowl and give it to Lisa .

              The young lady began to realize that the concept of darkness was only possible because there was light, but the light was only appreciated because there was the dreaded darkness.