The Fallen Kingdom. - Reviews

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I am a big fan of modern military vs fantasy military. But it’s in short supply these days. So, the premise of this novel is very exciting to me. And the dialouge has that feel of proper military training. When I first read the chapter, I was a little worried about why you would choose Iran. Then I remembered that there are supposed “Stargates” ruins in Iran as well as Iraq. So, it would be the perfect explaination for the transmigration into another world. Keep it up.

"Almost textbook for how it is always described."

Author is stretching the story so much, it's unbearable... Scenarios that could be nicely described with no more than 3 sentences are made into 3 chapters instead... MC is stupidly OP and his heavenly plot armor is gifting him the rarest of treasures whenever there is enough spacing left in the chapters... Otherwise typically chinese trash cultivation novel disguised as some sort of western sword and magic novel... Faceslapping, antagonistic braindead young masters that want to kill Mc for no reason at all, psychopathic MC and all the other copy paste wuxi things... I gave the novel 135 chapters to proof at least some development in quality but alas, there was none... Waste of money to read this novel... There isn't even anything game-related or system-related (except the transmigration from a game) in this novel...

"Gui MuXin, have you been slacking on your cultivation lately, why is your energy so low?"

"Sister-- I-- thank you" he pulled me into a tight hug, when he finished drinking the potion.

Ryu-listen a moment, the truth is that your mother if I fight against the demon Deliora, but she did not die, but she sacrificed and sealed the demon transforming herself into ice and freezing Deliora-

Awesome book with excellent character development..The mc is not overpowered but grows..Keep up the great work.????

Great character development..Interesting characters..The mc has a good sense of humour ???