The Fallen Heir, - Reviews

This is pure garbage. Traslation quality is garbage... Mc is garbage... Love interest is garbage... Everything is garbage! Don't bother with this...

This novel is interesting and fun read since I read the raw so I can say a few things about this novel. The protagonist is the usual transmigration protagonist that get system after certain time in that world and the world background was similar to other novel with modern fantasy taming novel. The story is good and the character was interesting. Unfortunately this novel is from faloo so the chance it got translated is slim still I hope it's got translated.

You should use grammarly. Right now your novel is so riddled with bad grammar that it is not worth reading. So go to grammarly.com. oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo

The free chapters display an actual good story, the sign in stuff is a well known theme but the setting of the story can make up for it.Sadly the chapters 41+, the paid ones, are a big downgrade in translation quality. Feels like MTL.

Interesting. So far I have only read a few chapters but what should I say? I am hooked. The characters are good. The setting is also cool. Great work, highly recommended

Might be worth going forward with. Looking forward to read more

This novel is a perfect blend of action, romance, and intrigue. The author has a unique voice that really draws you into the story. Each chapter left me wanting more. Can't wait to read more from this author

Rayhan tertawa mendengar permintaan Kinan yang agak takut mengatakannya,"Jangankan ice cream, kamu boleh makan aku juga kok. Malah aku seneng banget kalau kamu ngelakuin itu."kata Rayhan sambil tertawa kembali.

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- Another run-on sentence. This paragraph should be three sentences at least, but because the author doesn't know English... it's two sentences. The first paragraph of this chapter had a lot of short sentences so I thought something was wrong. The author needs to know what a sentence is before they attempt to write their story. The plot isn't bad, the bad writing and stupid protagonist is ruining the idea.

'Eunna-a, mian. Aku baru bisa membeli mainan ini untukmu. Sulit untukku mengumpulkan uang disana. Sejak kepergian appa, aku hanya bekerja seorang diri, jadi menabung pun harus lebih bersabar.

January 17, 2019