The Endless Hollow - Reviews

That's right! I'm shamelessly rating my own novel.Summary: a man got transmigrated into a merman. Gained abilities from the system. He tries to create his own kind and survive in the apocalyptic. The world background is basically an apocalyptic world where everything can happen. Ghosts, zombies, aliens, vampires, martial art, you name it. The story is still at the starting line but more adventure and lovey-dovey events are in the way. ........ Stay tuned.

biggest piece of trash, i am one chapter in and this thing has caused some real blood loss in my eyes just by reading it

Well somehow so good tho it remain me of that "superstar" but pls dont be racist like that one well im hoping for more interesting progress Overall 4/5

Nice story, can’t wait for more chapters.I really enjoyed reading from chapter one! One of the best thing so far, no filler, mc not a idiot, not too over powering but I think he will become overpowered!

Well first of all, I myself is not used with this writing style but I can see that its well written. Though the beginnig has a lot going on in just a few sentences that I was confused at first. I can't give any advice because I already forgot most of what a book needs to have but just a quick word, hope that the author improve (There's always room for imrpovement) and I hope this books gets a lot of reader and supporter

A wonderful action-packed story with a unique point of view. The writer is very talented with a wide imagination. Well-written novel. Keep writing!

what's up brother. .. .. this is another id of mine. .. .you asked me to exchange reviews. ..   .. this novel is good. ..  .the story ain't that cliche style and ig the market was lacking some cool evil character stories and you wrote it. .. .. I just hope if you are offered a contract it won't be related to daily updates as that might ruin it completely. .. .. cheer up.   .its great! !

THIS NOVEL IS DROPPED

Hey guys!! I'm back. I probably will not published the chapters in here. If you guys want to read it, Full chapter have been published in wattpad. Bye!! And I have change the title too, Mafia Leader Principessa in wattpad.  Wattpad username:Faylen01

Tadi sore adam menerima kabar dari kepala pelayan pribadinya. Mengatakan nona muda dalam keadaan baik, lukanya tidak serius hanya tergores tidak terlalu dalam tidak sampai mengenai urat nadinya. Hanya banyak darah yang keluar percuma, membuatnya lemas dan harus beristirahat total agar dapat pulih dalam dua hari kedepan. Nona sudah makan dan minum obat lalu segera tertidur karena pengaruh obat dan efek syok.

"hehe iyah tidak apa apa, mau meminang nya kan setelah aku lulus kuliah.. jadi aku beri jawaban nya setelah aku lulus kuliah dan resmi melamar ku.. hehe " jawab ku sambil tertawa kepada mas fahri.

Just like Saiph dads back pain. Always welcomed and hope to see more ?