the devil king and fox queen - Reviews

Not many sport story can hook me. So congrats. Not only that, i never saw a basketball story so it is a plus. However, the writing quality suck, but its ok since it is yours first time so i cant go hard on you. story development is ok but still can be improve  and i cant say anything about world background since u use real earth as the background. All in all, for a first story by new writer, u have good idea for the story and this make up with ur poor writing. i wish you luck.

The grammar is good with almost no mistakes.The sentence flow is not the best. This makes the story a chore to read at points.I found myself skipping over some of the cultivation explanations. Nothing innovative that makes these cultivation sections worth reading.The story is well thought out. The book is generic at the beginning, but becomes an interesting read later on.I recommend the book for xianxia readers looking for a new novel.This also a decent book for those who want to get into xianxia and don’t want to start reading a 1000 chapter book.This story has nothing unique or mold-breaking that would make non-xianxia readers interested.With all that said, I personally look forward to new chapters.

first off this series is highly anticipated by those in the know. invayne is a superb author, with both a good grasp of the language and an insane amount of creativity.soul fusion online or sfo has elements of many vrmmorpg stories. some elements of the story remind me of the best parts of stories like rssg, and martial gamer while avoiding most of thier pitfalls that make mmorpg stories disliked by some.the main character and other support characters are well thought out, relatable, and can be pictured as people instead of designed characters. they have their flaws and thier strengths instead of just being op or just cute they are much more. at the time of writing this review the story is still within the first ark but already it's addicting to read. I continue to look forward to this series as yuki/Ryu grow as both a person and gain status and power to seek the freedom they deserve.vote comment and like to promote this new gem of a novel.

So far so good! carry on releasing please! Can't wait to see more.Sssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss Don't mind me! Word limit                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                             

Exclaimer: This reveiw is based on my opinion and my opinion only. Others might disagree so don’t expect to see a review you want. So right off the bat, imma just going to say it is plain boring. You can read and know what is happening but it dose not make you very excited. The entire novel just seems... well... plain. Second, it is pretty hard to read. This does not mean that the grammer is bad, it just means that reading and trying to understand everything takes more brain power than normal, and personally, reading is a time to relax, not use your brain. Next, and last, is the humor. I read a lot of novels with bad humor, and I can still ignore and easily get through them but a novel 80% comedy that is not even funny to me, I just can’t. The humor is quite dry and it is part of why this novel was so boring for me.That is all.

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" The other statue then must be when he became old as it has some resemblance with the young one ".

Harém?

"Well there are 3 of us, me then there is Red and M.J." she replied.

The couple were sound asleep that they didn't even realize their barricade was gone and were hugging each other. Estella was sweating as if she was locked in a volcano filled with lava and was uncomfortable that she woke up in a flash and saw a man's chest in front of her. She realized that they were in contact that she unconsciously kick Elian's manhood while throwing the pillow barricades at him.

"Tuh kan, pasti kamu lupa. Kemarin malam, Beno mengantar kamu ke rumah, katanya pas kamu ikut latihan bersama Beno, kepala kamu terbentur bola basket, terus pingsan,"

At this moment the elevator started to moove and a few instant later stopped and the door opened, they found themselves in a large floor with hundreds of peoples in, with a single glance Suijin was sure that these people for the biggest majority didn't stand a chance to pass this exam and a large number of them will die without any doubt. At this moment a weird looking green creature who looked like a beans in a dark blue suit came toward the duo.