Can we talk about how the dialogue in this section reveals character without any exposition? The line that got me: 'If his voice had been as gentle as a trickling stream when she'd seen him before, now it was as dull and rumbling as rolling thunder.' TWO VOICES. The same man, completely different tones depending on who he's performing for. That's not just good writing—that's psychological horror encoded in dialogue. Su Xiaomei's lines are equally revealing. 'Hurry up. You said it would be tonight.' That's not concern for Lin Aiyun, that's impatience like they're running a business transaction. And then her jealousy flare—'A flash of irritation and jealousy crossed her eyes' when Niu Wenshan touches Lin Aiyun. The dialogue makes it clear: Su Xiaomei isn't just an accomplice, she's competitive about this. Niu Wenshan's curse—'The hell—I know. What's the rush? We're just getting started.' That casual cruelty in his voice, like he's enjoying this. Meanwhile Lin Aiyun's internal monologue is where the real voice shines. 'What an animal—using a child like that.' 'She was a fool too. If she hadn't let her kindness get the better of her.' Her self-reproach feels so honest, so human. And Liu Hui's dialogue throughout—the warm, flowing conversation about Shanghai, the embroidery invitation, the fish bargaining. Each character has a distinct rhythm. Liu Hui speaks in complete, flowing sentences. Niu Wenshan is all clipped aggression. Su Xiaomei is sharp and utilitarian. The kid just says 'Mother' and 'Okay.' Minimal dialogue, maximum impact.