THE DARK TEMPEST - Reviews

This story is one of the most well written ones. The story line is captivating and intriguing. I love it's beginning. It's a rare gem. I really appreciate the work of author.

Ahhhh!!!!! all of my beloved tags in one single xianxia novel !!!!!!! Gandalf is this heaven ???Enough BS. Loved your story. An enjoyable read.Finally I found a hidden gem. Thank you a d please dont drop it. ?

A far cry from something like … taking a dump. So instead of torturing myself with this I am going to seek sweet relief and let it all out!

Awesome book keep it up! I would say more but I'm trying not to spoil anything.❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️Legit though, the best feature is that the characters are not static but have changing personalities all the time. Some people might not like that, personally I do love it. They always learn from their experiences

It's not bad, actually it's good, there's some mistake here and there(won't be mentioning tho, I'll leave to you readers to find out) (what can you say author, a little tactic so they'll read it, right? *evil laugh)Just read it, warning tho, the update.. is kinda slow, I mean.. you can see it yourself.. One or two times update for a week, I think, or perhaps three.Still read, and write a review too.1 review= +1 word?

"is it over?" there was a ice cold voice came from behind.

Able to capture bugs and store it inside. When bugs are stored inside they can be taken out again but is absolutely loyal to the master. However, bugs that are ten levels higher than you have a 90% chance of breaking out and bugs that are ten levels higher than you or more can't be captured

"My father can beat anyone! Wait how do you know Igneel? I have a dragon as a partner?! So cool now I cant ever loose! Erza fight me!" yells Natsu as he is very happy at having a dragon as a partner.

Seriously!

Overall a disappointing read. Standard transmigration novel where the MC arrives in a world based on a Eroge game and of course he is the villain.The story itself was just to long in development, starting at him arriving at 5 years of age, but it dragged on through school years etc. after chapter 41 I threw it in. Initially the MCs (villain) goal was to save the heroines and sub-heroines from bad endings if not selected by the protagonist, think it was 4-5 Heroines and 3 sub-heroines, when out of the blue comes another transmigrator who also knows of this game and they team up splitting the girls between them. Mind you, both transmigrators are still young, oh and the second transmigrator is a girl (but maybe past life a guy, no idea). So 2 young kids are plotting, even discussing murder and later the MC actually incinerated a number of homeless bums. Yeh he prevented a future event happening but in my thoughts if he knew what was to happen then im pretty sure there were other ways to get around this episode. Still it happened and it really was kinda offputting.Anyways, the story was, in my mind, nothing exciting and read almost like a child’s story. I forget that a lot of Japanese novels tend to be rather formal and stiff in their delivery, which didn’t do this any favours. It was simply to childish and failed to deliver something that can capture a readers attention.Tl;dr - Try elsewhere for something more engrossing.

in chapter 8, I got caught up in feels, so I was like, let me forge up another motivational quote. Anyways, this is a review, so lemme review... I've only read 8 chapters so u might think that I don't have the credibility to review, but if I'm wrong, I'll come delete this review. but for me, it's quite obvious that this book is well thought of and probably wouldn't be dropped. there's a feeling of, I dony know how to describe it, like a budding masterpiece... ah, potential, there's potential in this book...now, time for motivation. potential... all of us have potential, it is in us, waiting to be discovered. to discover it, ur can't if ur don't believe in urself. if ur give up, if ur make excuses, ur could never unearth that potential. some people's potential is soo expansive that by doing the bare minimum they can still be considered as true talents, but to revolutionize a field, u need to unearth all of your potential. it can't be done if you make excuses. find urself... most importantly, when u think that ur can't make it, ur can't go on any more, I'm telling you, u probably can. don't let your demons win, be more vile than those demons, come out on top, stand tall, stand proud.

Pretty good story so far. Fairly unique premise.