The Beautiful Little Sister from the 70s - Reviews

When i read the I first chapter i thought that the negative comments were fake... But after reading upto 100 chapter by solely relying on my own my Divine patience... I can see that everything they sad is true. The protagonist is complete idiot.. He has heaven defying luck he always get top grade unique cultivation technique but that idiot wants to cultivate low grade cultivation technique, he gets mythical level pet but he wants to have mortal level pet, his step mother just gave him good food and he accepted her. Just when his step sister beat the hell out of him in front of whole school to humiliate him.. His step brother almost tried to destroyed his future but our protagonist tells him that he does not hate him but its just that he isn't too fond of him... And even when he have the heaven defying phone, top cultivation technique, mythical pet but his step brother and step sister can beat the hell out him any time, his step mother married his useless father to have this son.. Seriously. After reading until now I came to conclusion that if you give that phone to his step brother or sister they would have already became mythical level by now

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It's great book.... Liked it alot.. Can't wait to read further..... It's actually very well written and I can definitely say that the writer has put her soul into the story while writing it...

Sorry if i offended you but this story sucks, the character sucks and the way you wrote sucks. Honestly i think this is a wasted potential.

I don't mind the fact that this novel is unoriginal. What I do mind is how poorly executed it is. The translations are below average (with a chapter missing at around CH 18) and the lack of care put in the story, characters and worldbuilding doesn't do a good job at selling a compelling anything really.I know what this novel is trying to do. It's trying to be the sort of novel where the reader doesn't need to think too much about the intricacies of the story, characters and world but instead just turn their brain off and enjoy. The sort of novel where the author is almost always making this up on the spot as he writes without thinking ahead much (if at all). That's an ok concept, it's popular and it can be done well.Unfortunately this author just isn't very good at it. The cheat is overpowered but boring and meaningless, theres really nothing enjoyable about this series, it's a struggle to care about any developments in the story or characters. Insultingly soulless, low quality stuff. 1/5.

I had to drop this at chapter four. The book may get better but, it is asking little much when you devote an entire chapter to (This new game is a secret from everyone)  and then immediately follow it with (at 20 minutes since the game launched thousands of players logged in and ""guilds"" were exclaiming wow at our MC).As of chapter 4 the main character had only bought the game 3 and a half hours ago, and only had one hour and a half of play time. For a game where the CEO is pissed that one person may know he wants to sell something,  you can't suddenly throw in guilds and a thriving intake money to teal money system over a three hour period. I am sorry, you put a hard short timeframe for the main characters actions and then ignored it for everything else. It takes time for a game system.that costs thousands of dollars per unit to sell. It takes advertising for ANYone to buy it. A second chance book can be good. But this one trips over itself trying to show how OP the second chance is too fast at a cost.

I watched the first 5 chapters and they were very good, but it's a shame they were so short.                                                         

"Speak when spoken too." I reply looking at him coldly.

~ i looked at the friged and it was open i saw something laying in front of it ~

Elsa:unang Una hindi ko niloko ang daddy mo dahil mahal ko sya!pangalawa,hindi ko sya anak sa labas dahil anak namen sya ng daddy mo!kakambal mo sya!pangatlo,si thomas ang dahilan kung bakit nahiwalay sa atin ang kapatid mo!(nakatingin Kay thomas)

(Hinawakan niya ang kamay ko na para bang hinuhulaan niya ako medyo kinabahan ako.)

Only shooting stars break the moldSomebody once told me the world is gonna roll me