The Author's Playground - Reviews

Finally..is comiiing..thanks author for updated again.. I love so much this novel make me feeling comfy and not boring with this life distancing..stay safe author and be healthy and the last don't forget for the next..hehee

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The story is good and keep the good work for more interesting upcoming chapters, maybe slowdown a bit the progress of the MC it's kinda fast forward atlest put some small dialog in between.

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Quiet good exactly. There are some loopholes or a part what i don't like example starter pack these are what will help you surrive but author skip it like nothing important.but i can't handle this kind of story. i will mostly flip the table. His naivety is too much.

"You're crazy Butcher!" all of a sudden Pulse screamed angrily as his finger trembled as he pointed at Butcher with a terrified look on his face

Kenjutsu Mastery: A+

"Yes, but... During selection, we are obliged to pick up goods from the Deep Lands, right? The Crystalshadow Valley is the limit that separates these dangerous land and the Shallow Lands to which we are accustomed. Most Merchants who will participate in the selection have already set foot in the Crystalshadow Valley at least once." Heiki retorted immediately, doubting some of his brother's words.

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He understood his power now, the harder Jason was hit, the bigger the explosion after. But it only worked that way. He could conjure the strength but the explosion would never come without a trigger. Being hit was that trigger.

She turned back out of fear and after several breathes mustered her courage to take a peak once more.

"Good morning, my damned children, now sit down."