Sorry but not to my liking. Why does most novel makes the mc stupid , which ruins the novel, even through they have high potential “System”. The mc is always weirdly stupider than normal person in novels with system. And mc in this novel was supposed to be a smart hacker that cheated in every way, but after he was transported to another world he became stupid. Those kind of novels can only progress by “The Lucky Hand Of Author” which will get obvious as the story goes on so it’s better if you make the mc smart to have many other ways to progress the story. For example he is so stupid to even try to find out about the world. Also he has the ability to create any skill but has not done that and I know that’d be OP but that’s the author’s fault for making it too OP. My suggestion in this kind of novels would be to make the system OP but the mc would have to work for those benefits. You should be able to guess what I’m talking about and if the system is OP without having to do any work than the only way to balance that would be to make the mc overly stupid which will literally ruin the story. At first it may seem like a comedy but that’s gonna be get boring very soon. This was an easy fix at the beginning but it’ll be very hard later on but still hope that you at least try to fix little by little as the story goes on.
