The Angels Broken Romance

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while it starts out OK, just another generic transmigration OP character arc.At some point everything changes with no explanation, seems to be multiple missing chapters and characters.

I hate this story. Ahem. So basically, the MC decides to start refining pills, so he rents a room to do so. And somehow, the gang of antagonists are inside the room, mocking him constantly. Like, HOW? WHY? Can't the MC kick them out or something? I thought he rented a room, not a theatre. Don't the antagonists have better things to do? There's an assessment coming up soon, shouldn't they be cultivating? Faceslapping is manageable but this story, the author just pours it on the plot with no regard to logic, while the MC just sits there and lets it happen... is unbearable.

Huft, truly disappointing. Just say u can continue to update a new chapter, but how about the other reader who new to this. do they have to buy it in Amazon. Amazing plan tho. ^^b

all I can is that I love the book........................................................................................................

setting aside the poor writing grammar, the story is cool and must be continued until it hit the 10000chapter mark. the mc is op(for now) but i guess this is only one of the 'mediocre' world there is. not even chapter 1000 or 2000, mc is already on par with the utmost being/god-like entity in the realm of gods. all in all good story, bad grammar, cool development, mindblowing plot twist, and the way the cannon fodder is being mention with worth 1 chapter is amazing. after that, they will die. keep up the good work! please continue, that and "wired" is actually "weird" :)