The novel started off very splendidly, though it dropped hard after the halfway point. Suddenly the focus shifted from the mc to some other reincarnator and mc's redundant escapades unrelated to the main plot.
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Story is okay ...but it could have been better ..there are several loopholes ....and majority of scences seem incomplete.....?? to me.....hope u understand.
"It resembles the energy I possess when I am covered by my mark of curse" - Indra thought as he placed himself just above the ground that radiated that energy. "Damn, just now that I was going to return with my nakamas, I find this," continued Indra complaining.
