hmhm I'm not quite a good critique nevertheless take my world with a grain of salt or whatever condiments you have First of all , sheees that started in a formal way like a proper review hehe pffft ,nah I'ma just say this novel is quite good though there's currently only about 40ish chapters , the updates is also considerably fast , and the writing quality is good , and the story is still developing well enough to make me emersed in reading well not really emersed emersed but it's up there is the emersed scale ⚖️ so do go on with the story writer nim l'ma be just watching,waiting,and reading of course , keep up the good work ya got
