Swords across time - Reviews

I love this story all you need is to improve grammar, update speed, and story development along with other things. Tbh, I'm not that good at writing either and I'm not saying your not good. You are actually the first person's novel I really enjoy. Keep up the good work and train harder....

Looks amazing simply from the sypnopsis. Really looking forward to this novel’s release!! Hmm i don’t know what to write anymore...................

Literally the same as the author's other novel but with some small changes.  Also very predictable (cliché), the secondary characters have no common sense (reasoning), another in which the protagonist cannot be called a villain just because he says so in the novel.  The end of the novel does not bring anything new that another does not see, you no longer have this type, if you have not read the author's other novel you can remember to read.

I loved the cover and how the chapters are short. The story line is well defined and I really like the author's writing style. Overall I can say this is an incredible webnovel I have read so far. I am giving it a five star.

He could have done better if it went forward especially with demon world and other interesting strories that might have arise there.I wish he can control this amazing work cause it  beginning was really great compared to others

I've never read a book like this before, and found it interesting! It feels like I'm reading a Japanese Light Novel. The only thing I'd like to see is perhaps a little bit faster pacing, but everything else seems okay. Maybe more dialog, and situations like when they are trying to get the club approved? Overall, seems enjoyable... You also can use dialog to explain things like when they are going to compete in the competition... Thanks for writing this!

She said this is a cute voice that could melt any man in the world. It instantly made Hai'ers little brother stand tall in excitement.

"Keep your voice down idiot," Ichigo said quietly. "Yes, I'm back and now I am going to sleep," he said as he grabbed Kon and threw him against the closet before he plopped himself down on the bed and closed his eyes allowing himself to fall into a deep sleep.

"Huwag kang mag-alala Jules ako man nagugutom na din. Nauna lang magparamdam ang dragon mo sa'ken." At hinawakan sa kamay ng binata ang dalaga upang yayain nang pumunta sa canteen.

Mana to use: 12000

You'll never shine if you don't glow

Balak niyang sakyan ang kabaliwan ng kambal para patunayan na wala itong katotohanan at magising na si Ark  sa mga delusion niya.