The premise of the story is interesting. A young prince of a particularly unfair kingdom is found to not have any magical abilities and is exiled. When all seems lost, he is transformed into an angelic species, a nephilim, and gets to prepare his revenge into the rival country.The story is however not particularly well written, and it’s not just because of the recurrent typos (which seem to often be caused by an autocorrector). It is frequent for the author to make long redundant descriptions when the point was already well conveyed in one paragraph. The character is often justifying his actions over and over when his motives were already sufficiently obvious given what we knew of him. Sometimes the author repeats what he just said, as if he never reread himself or has unfinished sentences. In short, the story suffers from a lack of editing, proofreading.
