Sweet Shot - Reviews

It is OK. But sadly it is already finished. Theare are more books from Mao Ni.Last book from same author is "The Path Toward Heaven" and it is still ongoing.

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It's cool, but these wrong and repeated chapters are very annoying. It's almost all the time, 1 chapter of the novel and then 1/2 wrong/repeated chapters. I don't know how it works here, if you can't edit it after it's posted, but it's a shame to leave these chapters wrong/repeated and every time the author/someone makes the same mistake. The novel isn't bad, it's good and nice to read, except for some problems with English writing, where they change "sweat" to "sweet" and the MC's name is often spelled wrong too (I don't speak English, but it would be nice to do a final proofread before posting). Other than that, it's a good read.

(Kai)

*Once Marika tells Stella she's here for the secretary interview, Stella pointed to a waiting room full of other women who were to over or under dressed. Some wore really short skirts and revealing tops. while some wore to much like they are covering up a secret. There is one obvious thing Marika noticed, They all had to much make-up on it's like they want to seduce the big boss or something. She just shrugged her shoulders as she took up a spot near the window and waited for her number to be called.*

Ding*

Karin hesitated, her complexion paling. She didn't completely believe Nel's words, but from what she had seen of Nel's character, Nel could at least be somewhat trusted. Moreover, the Hollows didn't seem as Evil as the Shinigami made them out to be. The fury that she had felt from the Arrancar over one of their own getting injured was genuine too.

She asked in slightly shaking in fear.

regrows larger canine

She was looking kind of dumb with her finger and her thumb

Marilyn, who has put her facade on, looks down shyly.