Supreme Heroes System - Reviews

Interesting story, but too many grammar mistakes unfortunately- I think it was translated from another language and the errors are too disruptive to the story. Sorry author, did not finish

It's a very interesting story...

Me emociona este libro, es sencillamente maravilloso. A medida que lo leo no puedo evitar preguntarme como es que yo no había escuchado de él antes. Maravilloso, sigue así

Interesting beginning, the hero seems to be the type to do anything although his actions at first seem meaningless, finally I find the topic of the worm strange, but overall I find this a good book that I enjoy.

it follows the exact plot and system of the novel about beith a bandit ...................... .............b.................................

I already love the plot, I hope it gets picked and or voted for. ................................ ......

Maybe I'm biased but I quite like virtual reality gaming books, and this one has a unique twist in that its not based on some fantasy real but on the real world. I don't think I've ever seen a book do something like this and its so cool.Imagine all the places that will be added in the future too! Imagine chernobyl landscape where they have to fight mutated monsters or they discover cthulhu underwater and they have to go in and nerf him. Okay maybe I'm getting too excited, but imagine the possibilities! There's far too few chapters to get the full picture right now but what I see is good. The grammar and details are all there too, i'd really love to see if they go on to have bigger weapons like tanks, missile launchers, sniper rifles etc but thats for later chapters. Author should update more XDKeep up the good work

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"Until when do you think you will make us wait!?" she yelled, "Sorry..." was the only thing Moon said before being enveloped in black bandage coming from the now Zanpakuto... "Kisuke, what did you do again!?" "Honestly nothing it's him who called this Asauchi by accident and accepted it, but something tells me it's not the last surprise we will have, help me transport him to a chamber we can't let him stay here like that and I want to see if we can let him out of... This... " I tried to touch him but more bandage came out and attacked me" I suppose we can let him here then... " I looked toward Yoruichi who glared at me "What's happening Kisuke, tell me the truth..." she said to me, I looked deeply at here before sighing and explaining everything about Moon and the Zanpakuto to her, after being yelled at for hour I decided to guard him.

Klora felt too tired that he yawned repeatedly. He tried to prop up his back with the tree when he felt a touch in his hand. He was confused at first and thought that he was hallucinating until he felt the touch again. He slowly moved his head towards his hand and found an aged hand  with two golden coins with it. Only half of the hand was showing as the other part was buried.

He instinctively covered his face with his arms but that's what Ramius was aiming for while her flame breath was just a feint and only serves to temporarily blind him.

His body as if it had a mind of its own streaked across the darkness like a shooting star, his body pulled along by his waist, while his bottom and top half bent back almost into a V shape. Grant immediately started getting nauseous from the force of the speed and had, I guess, "ghost tears" flying out of his eyes. Grant fumbling for the words after a few seconds screamed, " Stop, Stop,stop,stop,stop."