I never try to write anything like this but for this story, I have to. My first thought was how far it could move me. When I read the first chapter, I just blinked and nodded. Alright. Not that bad. But when I finished the chapter Neo-Genesis. I wept tears. Yes, this man did cry. I was surprised that the author has a way to tell the story. If this novel were a man, he would have a high IQ and EQ because the storyteller is smart and smart to move this reader to feel like the characters. I like most of everything, plot, characters, the warmth of this family, and some little hints that the author already put in at the beginning. What I like the most is ‘less is more.’ The narration is not overdramatic. The author just tells his story and uses surrounding tools to show details which is simple but ‘deep’. Great job. Undisclosure is one of a few fictions I read on my smartphone and did not check how long the chapter is. I read it smoothly. There are some holes, for example, POV, the unnatural conversation. Or the writing of some scenes is not powerful enough to build emotions. But it’s just a little thing that I can overlook. I recommend it. This story should deserve more views.
