Well written story aimed at sporting enthusiasts using the common trope of reliving a life marred by regrets with a system that rewards effort and achievement with the athletic improvement needed to become the Greatest of All Time. This story is notable more for the execution than the idea, but is no less entertaining for that.
So slow paced. The story keeps rotating on the same pattern over and over again with no visible improvement with the MC. Its just s*x and face slapping over and over again. It's still slightly better than other novels but still, it could have been better.
I'm not a professional in writing reviews but your book rocks I love how detailed your writing is from the prologue to chapter 4. you started a bit slow but later I got the hang of it. it's so interesting.I love the interactions between the characters, just from your writing I got to know the kind of dynamics the friends have. it's amazing ?.
Kya hai sub faltu ka, Land khara nehi ho rahaha, rani ko chodo, tab maja aye,are e banda jise marji chod sakta he, firbhi sala pressure gravity kar raha hai.chutiya.
another case of missed used tags.in addition the plots quite bad the MCs schemes and actions are transparent and easy to identify for example the fire incident was poorly done the soot on his cloths after the fire,the smell.plus alibi actually makes him suspect
