Substitute Luna - Reviews

This novel is truly an absolute joy to read!! For starters everyone has to know that the our MC Evan has already reincarnated twice in order to save humanity from his fate . And the MC doesnt get things handed to him . The only special item he has is called a void blood pendant that he obtained in his previous reincarnation that traveled with him  for the third time . This pendant is also related to his own talent that he never knew he had. So it cant be classified as a cheat unless you want to call his talent a cheat. I mean I have to admit that initially I was like what!! How can he be the only one to have talent for this class ? But hey you see this in every decent novel . The MC has got to be special! You see this even in western novels. Other than that, the antagonists are also very smart and careful except for  dumb characters that are totally rare in the novel! Aye! To top it off , the MC is not irksome and quite likable tbh. His personality and the way he carries himself is nice! The third best part is that the story is not predictable and the MC Evan doesnt have a perfect memory . So he still has to deal with the buttery effect and unpredictable events happening.Finally Romance!! ThAuthor Shadow seems to have a good grasp on how to write romance!    Best of all , I like to see the MC outsmarting others who think they have everything under control . So yes this novel has the whole package and I highly recommend it!

I actually laugh out loud reading this novel~High shameless master disciple work there.and for 140 characters i would add the good translator work! +10 points for giving translation and notes in the end of the champ ;)

Good start i think you should work more in the character and the length of the novel.Hddfdsadffrfffggfdssggtfvhhffvggggggggsssssßee422t578ouy54eerttt

Here are my thoughts about this novel based on what I read,World Background: So far the world background is mostly fine, I mean the author actually gives some description about it. But, I believe the author will expand more about the world itself especially the place where the mc living.Character: So far I do appreciate that author give the main character Alexender and Amelia a significant appearance which is quite interesting. The character also have distinct personalities especially on the two main cast. But, I do believe the author will give more context about the character's background and the relationship to make this romance novel more exciting to read.As for the writing, in my opinion, it's quite smooth to follow, but there are some flaws that the author can fix easily and I am sorry for saying this. Based on what I read, some paragraphs only contained one long sentence. Therefore, I prefer the author to separate it into 2-3 sentences, so it can make the reader more efficient to read. Overall, that's all I have to say about this novel, and thank you very much. Keep up the good work!!

I wonder who the little girl is and why would someone want to hurt her or what’s going on? I’m at the edge of my seat like always. 300,000,000 that’s a lot of money and the way you went about spending it is very smart so far it appears!

Man, I’m genuinely impressed by this work especially by the world building which is almost too real to just be fictional

I'll be shameless just this once and rate my own novel. ?This is my first ever attempt at getting my writing out there. As expected, it's nerve-wracking. I hope you enjoy reading it as much I loved writing it. Thank you for your support.

unfailing love. As the trials and sins in my shattered life pushed me to Jesus, I began just spending

"Basically, yes." Max responded.

Seeing this, Xing Xing gave the twins to Tiao He and went to her brother. Trying to reassure him that she was happy with his visit and couldn't be happier.

Author is definitely a gem. Good storyline, good writing that just improves the more chapters I read, awesome world and the story itself is great.This is definitely a gem among diamonds. I recommend this book to all those who loves great story.