Streets to Fortune - Reviews

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The quality of the writing is over all alright there are a few spelling mistakes here and there but nothing that can't be over looked. The stability of the updates is pretty consistent so not much to complain about. The real downfall of this story is the characters and their development, and by development I mean the lack of it. The characters frankly are boring and very 2d most of their personalities can be described with a few words such as, mean and money hungry, talented and ignorant, genius and quiet, and for Ao he has nothing other than being the only other guy in the story. The story development is also very bad it is mostly the same over used jokes and the protagonist getting bullied by his so called friends. The Mc is supposed to be smart but then makes the same mistakes over and over again, and then it is just labeled as a joke. The one thing that makes the Mc unique, other than his race, is almost instantly given to his friends and they are only slightly slower than the "genius" mc. This story had so much potential, and I really enjoyed it at the stat but then the repetition of the same thing made the story get old real quick. As a suggestion to the author pleased do not keep forcing the same jokes, build on the characters more, give something to make the mc unique again, other than his race, allow the mc to grow and learn from his mistakes instead of repeating them. These are just a few things that could be done to improve the over story. Once again I love the concept of the story and the beginning was great, it just never let the characters to be built cause it to get boring really quickly.

Came from legion, loved the beginning of the book  Looking forward to more  Will update rating when the updates become little more frequent  Keep up the good work Biako

Just in the last month, this is the third copy cat of WBMA. These copycats bring shame to the original.The original is just called World's Best Martial Artist and that's it. It's one of the best novels of 2020. Worlds merging theme where humanity is struggling for survival (hence why no fights in initial chapters, it's built up for future fortress defenses, battles, skirmishes, wars etc), long chapters, good humour, solid world building, interesting cheat, lifelike side characters - some felt more of MC than MC himself when he was still growing, and he even treated some of them as his role model that he wanted to surpass. They have their own MC halo. And much more

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What a great story!!!!. I really like this story.Leo isa calm cunning and shrewd and amazing person.I like him very much.I think he was an older and experienced man in his first life.It will help him his current time.By the way You are a talented writer.I am looking forward to read your story.I am glad you didn't give this up.Good luck Thanks.

Reviewing after reading a few chapters...This novel really packs a punch. It does not hold back with its bluntness, and it is highly informative to boot. The personality of the author shows in his writing, and I personally believe we can be friends irl with his perspective. I like the historical references, and I like how the narration points out the absurdity of some, or most, of them. The storytelling feeds you something, and you can easily digest it no problem. I admit, I'm also a sucker for the comedic elements of this novel. Well done, Mr. Author.

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Your work is nice and intriguing, the first chapter keeps one hooked and eager to read more. I like the development of the story, the characters, everything. keep up the good work

At chapter 55This is a really creative fan fiction that occurs in an anime world and doesn't make me cringe at forcing the character to interact with most of the main characters in Naruto. For someone like me who likes the growth from weak to strong, this is gold as it is well-paced and has good story development. I was gutted when the Author took his break but good thing he saw the light and the will of fire made him continue with this novel

Chapter 33 reviewI like the execution of the story and the use of the everyone’s a lord trope. I also like the limitations given to the MCs super OP ability as well. However the MC has to be the stupidest most uncreative person taken to this world which makes it hard to push through the chapters. I know that the author has said that he is new to the world and doesn’t know how to use his abilities but the way the story is going I don’t see him getting better. ‼️SPOILER‼️For instance he uses the internet to get ideas of what to create in this world, ??u200d♂️ come on now.Despite the flaws I will continue  to read to see if this idiot gets smarter and to follow the progression of the story. Overall pretty good job author, keep it up.

He looks at me and I swear his eyes are burning a hole in me and when he smirks, I just stare back in horror and disgust. Before I can run Willow is pulling me to a sit and saying something about that guy but it is background noise, all I hear from her is "new... 'Bout three months...kinda scary... Church is starting."